Technology Transforms the Life of an Immortal Cultivator

I've been reading the book for a long time. Can you give me some suggestions (?) I feel like the language feels like a dialect for some reason (?). I personally feel that it can be made more popular. Then the overall plot feels less exciting than in the mortal world. It feels good that there are doubts and patterns in the mortal world, but the dungeon tasks have to be done one by one, and the upgrade is too fast. It feels like the character description could be made more individual. For example, the old woman who wants to live longer could be made more hypocritical, similar to a conspirator who longs for immortality? The same goes for Jian Ling, who can deepen his love for small money and freedom, and at the same time have a little bit of justice. I don't know why I feel like Jian Ling has turned into a bandit recently (covering his face and laughing). I don't know what the author thinks of some suggestions. If the author thinks it works, you can try to adopt them. I hope that the author's novels will get better and better as he writes, and that Jian Ling will become stronger and stronger and live a happy life with Mu Xiaoyao (?)

Mainly because the protagonist does not have weapons of mass destruction

Very nice and colorful content

Funny, really funny

The concept is good, with ups and downs.