City: Start with the Billionaire Immortal

It's pretty good, but there are too many slap-in-the-face plots. It doesn't have the momentum and dominance of an immortal. It's just a show-off and slap-in-the-face plot every time. It's similar to the plot of other rebirth novels. I think the harem issue is okay. After all, we are not mortals anymore. Ten or eight is considered a small amount. The only shortcoming is that the momentum and personality change, to be more cold and cool, with less show-off and slap-in-the-face plots.

That day I donated 1 ton of blood in the hospital and went home to write poems. When I had written more than 2,000 poems, I was about to take a break and publish a paper on cancer. Then I saw a tiger fighting a bear downstairs. I jumped from the 18th floor. I went down and adjusted my body in the air to land stably. There was a 40m steel plate between the landing point and the target. I was extremely angry instantly, and my heart spurted out 5 tons of blood. I was about to punch through the 40m steel plate to stop me, but I didn't expect the two people next to me to fall to the ground. Frightened passers-by came over and besieged me. The first strong man rushed over and I threw him on my back. He twisted his head to his neck and fell unconscious. The second man took out a rifle and tried to shoot me. In extreme anger, I dodged 30 rounds of bullets and disarmed him with one punch. And penetrated the 40m steel plate behind him, and then I continued to rush towards the tiger. When the tiger saw me, it pounced directly. I slipped under it with a sliding shovel and slit its belly with the knife I brought with me. Its internal organs fell to the ground, and it died on the spot. The bear came over immediately. As soon as it came over, I held my breath and pretended to be dead. As soon as it turned around, I immediately locked his throat, fixed his girdle with my legs, and suffocated him in one minute. At this time, an adult male Tyrannosaurus suddenly rushed out from behind. Unexpectedly, my extremely angry punch not only penetrated the 40m steel plate, but also opened a space-time rift. Without saying a word, I quickly tied the knife firmly to the foot plate. The Tyrannosaurus rex rushed in front of me, opened its mouth and bit it from top to bottom. I rolled forward to avoid the attack, stood up and jumped, grabbed the front paw and hung it on the Tyrannosaurus rex's chest. There was a dagger tied under one of my feet, so I kicked it with that leg. Every kick was equivalent to stabbing it. After about seven or eight kicks, it died. Before I could relax, another 100 people from the mysterious organization came and wanted to arrest me for research. Of course I didn't agree, so I started fighting with them for 75 minutes. After the fight, I ran 30 kilometers waving my hands. Because I was too tired, I lay down in someone's yard and fell asleep. The Tibetan Mastiff raised by this family wanted to eat me when it saw me sleeping. I punched it in the eye socket, and then I woke up and was a little scared at that time. It became more aggressive and wanted to pounce. I then did a split jump with both legs and bit it on the grass. I directly clamped its neck with my scissor legs and used the force of landing to rotate 720 degrees to twist off his head. Seeing this, the dog owner kept scolding me for compensation. I just smiled and continued to sleep while lying in a pool of blood, because I knew that I could use my scissor legs to twist off his head at any time. People cannot be generalized.

It looks good, but there is only one update a day, which is not enough.

Super awesome! I like this kind of cool article, I hope the author will update it soon😊😊😊

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God: Mortal, what wish do you want? I can help you now. Mortal: God I want the destruction of the earth. God: Oh, mortal, I can't help you realize your wish, please change it. Mortal: Then I hope the author will update soon God: OK, I will help you realize it. After saying this, the author flew to God God said domineeringly: Author, please update quickly, and I will ask my people to give you five-star praise. Author: Good God

Come on, I want to wait for you to write more, but I haven't gained weight yet after reading it.

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I'm tired of it, this kind of mindless and refreshing novel is more interesting than the novel subject matter in the front, but most of the latter is the routine of traditional slap-in-the-face novels. The protagonist is either getting slapped in the face or on the way to get slapped in the face, so it is suitable for some newbies to watch. The writing is not bad, but some loopholes are too obvious. Anyway, good work, author, I hope I can write a better article.

Author, are you so short? Update soon. I would like to call you the longest man.

Anyway, it's great, worth watching if you like harems.

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I hope the author can make more updates, and I wish this book will get better and better! 💪🏻

There are novel ideas that have never been seen before. I hope there will be more chapters and more articles, so that it doesn't end too early!

I hope the author might be able to do it faster

Hey, this author is very gratifying to me, come on! Bring me my 20-meter-long sword and shave Xiuer's head.

It's not easy to write a book and give you a five-star red flag

Maybe it's a little late, but I'm optimistic about you. Come on, Ollie😊 (five stars)

One on two, the male protagonist has a great body

It's just that updates are very slow, and the protagonist doesn't spend money. The plot requires spending money to buy something. To support the consumption of immortal energy, you can become the Great Immortal King. Whoever writes the homework must rewrite the process of spending money. This is the key point of the plot.

Author, your writing is very good. Can you stop updating one chapter a day and finish reading it in less than a while? Is that okay? I hope you can work hard and add a few more chapters. Two chapters a day is fine, but one chapter a day is not enough. I am already short of books, and I am already chasing this one.

It's very beautiful, only 4 characters.

Come on, the plot is good and very engaging, especially for someone like me.

It looks good, but there are too many tricks in the front. It's a slap in the face routine, but overall it's pretty fun and the car is fast.

No need for good-looking ones

Divine hero + immortal cultivation + harem, three wishes are fulfilled at once, so I give it a 5-star rating

Similar people are suitable for having fun together, and complementary people are suitable for growing old together. Be patient and keep surprises, they will brew slowly. "From the moment I picked up the pen and prepared to describe your details, I couldn't help but get distracted. I'm really sorry that I didn't write a comment, but I really thought about it for an hour."

I'm so sorry to the author for not giving a five-star review.

Yes, I don't think you can do it just by cultivating immortals. At least you need to add ancient warriors, as long as they are not cultivating immortals.

Very good author, come on, if you update 100 pictures a day, give me a call hahahahaha