By chance, Luo Yi broke into a forbidden area. In order to return to the real world, he had to complete a special task assigned by the local leader. Since then, he has embarked on a long journey of exploration~
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Personally, I think it's quite good-looking. Although it's not as good as Shuangwen, it has its own characteristics. It won't follow other people's routines without thinking. Except that the logic is a bit messy, everything else is fine. I believe the author will get better and better. Don't deliberately cater to other people's ideas. You can add some opinions appropriately so that you have your own style.
The author, in mystery novels, must clarify his ideas, know how to foreshadow, create more tense atmosphere, and make people immersive. At the same time, the daily subplots must use humorous techniques, so as to attract readers. As an old bookworm, I hope the author can write better and better.
It's pretty cool, why did you change the name?
The plot is quite exciting, and the description is OK. Yeah, chasing after
There aren't many chapters at the moment, but they look okay. Although it is not as brain-burning as those classic works of reasoning, there are some clues that we ordinary people can relate to. But it still looks very comfortable, and it still feels like participating in solving a crime. I hope the author can create a complete story. I don't know if I've seen too much Conan. I think it's very interesting to reveal the perpetrator's motives and methods when solving a crime. Of course, many people complained about Conan's solving the case, and the perpetrators felt regretful. This point needs to be dealt with. After all, the novel is much longer than an animated episode. The content should be richer, but not boring. I hope the author will work hard😄
The book is very nice and the author is also very interesting😂😂😂😂
It looks good. Of course, this is my personal favorite. Of course, no sex or anything like that is allowed (ꐦ ͡°ᴗ ͡°)
Not bad, not bad. The twist is so unexpected that it's particularly brain-burning.
Personally, I think it's quite good-looking. Although it's not as good as Shuangwen, it has its own characteristics. It won't follow other people's routines without thinking. Except that the logic is a bit messy, everything else is fine. I believe the author will get better and better. Don't deliberately cater to other people's ideas. You can add some opinions appropriately so that you have your own style.
The author, in mystery novels, must clarify his ideas, know how to foreshadow, create more tense atmosphere, and make people immersive. At the same time, the daily subplots must use humorous techniques, so as to attract readers. As an old bookworm, I hope the author can write better and better.
It's pretty cool, why did you change the name?
The plot is quite exciting, and the description is OK. Yeah, chasing after
There aren't many chapters at the moment, but they look okay. Although it is not as brain-burning as those classic works of reasoning, there are some clues that we ordinary people can relate to. But it still looks very comfortable, and it still feels like participating in solving a crime. I hope the author can create a complete story. I don't know if I've seen too much Conan. I think it's very interesting to reveal the perpetrator's motives and methods when solving a crime. Of course, many people complained about Conan's solving the case, and the perpetrators felt regretful. This point needs to be dealt with. After all, the novel is much longer than an animated episode. The content should be richer, but not boring. I hope the author will work hard😄
The book is very nice and the author is also very interesting😂😂😂😂
It looks good. Of course, this is my personal favorite. Of course, no sex or anything like that is allowed (ꐦ ͡°ᴗ ͡°)
Not bad, not bad. The twist is so unexpected that it's particularly brain-burning.