Traveling through the parallel space, Xia Cheng awakened the system. As soon as he opened the novice gift package, he felt like he was about to take off! [Congratulations on getting the junior anchor qualification] [Top chicken game system +1] [Top feel settings +1] [Top technical experience +1] [Top live broadcast equipment +1] [Single-family sea view villa +1] With the help of the system, Xia Cheng found that he was getting stronger and stronger, almost invincible!
Reader comments
It feels so confusing to write. Nothing that stands out. I just read the first few chapters. I have no intention of watching it at all. There was no such passion at all. It just doesn't have that kind of passion. Emotion
Come on, I'd rather start like this and just persuade you to quit. This beginning is really embarrassing. I'm not surprised at all when the protagonist gets the system, and it's not at all convenient to change the scene instantly. I'm curious whether the protagonist is too big-hearted or has no brains. Moreover, the plot development in the first few chapters is not very fast. I have seen many similar ones. Novel, compared with other novels, this one is too bad. I couldn't be interested at all when I read this book. I felt it was average, bland, and the routine was old. Compared with other similar novels, I have to say that this book is as bad as *. Alas, people are more popular than people, so when you compare goods, you have to throw it away, say goodbye, and abandon it d(ŐдŐ๑)
Big cheers to the author. 😘
I read Chapter 5, and I felt that it seemed a little soulless at first, without that kind of passion. It felt like I was reading about daily life, and the most important situation was not written out. This is not a real review of the book, because I haven't finished it yet.
Let's change the name. Don't call it PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds. If you turn on Quanmai, you can hear it all over the map. Am I playing a fake PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds?
It's okay, let's see if there is a harem in the back
The more you look at the back, the less interesting it becomes! ! Too messy! ! You can see how those great masters started! ! I don't even know what you mean! ! As for time travel! You are now in that villa! I don't even know what planet that is! How did you travel through the past! ! Don't just write whatever comes to mind! This is very messy
To be honest, the overall feeling is not good and it looks a bit messy. I suggest that the author can learn from other people's works.
What did the author want to write about? It's so messy, it feels like it's been pieced together, and is it about mobile games or client games? Why do the voices in some mobile games appear in client games? Now that M762 is out, is there still a Quality Plaza? It feels like everything is messed up
Mobile game? There are also human-machine... The author's Pingying elite score is not very high... I can't write at the level of a master.
The male protagonist was given a house earlier, and he was not surprised at all. It was as if he knew it in advance. But I still give it 5 stars. After all, writing is not easy. ☺️
Where does the equipment come from in the containers outside the military base? You can't even skydive inside a cave!
There's no reason for the poor rating. I'm used to five stars. Besides reading so many chapters, how do I play the game? Why don't I start a game by myself after reading this?
It looks okay, but the author still needs to continue to practice his writing. The previous writing is a pool of stagnant water. The movements, psychology, and language are all very stiff, making it seem like reading the description directly. The pace is too fast and not delicate enough. Practice your writing more.
It makes no sense, I don't know what he is writing. Could it be that what the author is writing is not the same game as what I am playing, so why is it different from what I understand?
The front may be a bit messy, but it's healthy. I like it~
It's too chaotic, too fast-paced
Take a look here.
The writing is too verbose. It's still eunuch writing.
After reading the beginning, I was completely uninterested. The author still needs to work harder.
It feels so confusing to write. Nothing that stands out. I just read the first few chapters. I have no intention of watching it at all. There was no such passion at all. It just doesn't have that kind of passion. Emotion
Come on, I'd rather start like this and just persuade you to quit. This beginning is really embarrassing. I'm not surprised at all when the protagonist gets the system, and it's not at all convenient to change the scene instantly. I'm curious whether the protagonist is too big-hearted or has no brains. Moreover, the plot development in the first few chapters is not very fast. I have seen many similar ones. Novel, compared with other novels, this one is too bad. I couldn't be interested at all when I read this book. I felt it was average, bland, and the routine was old. Compared with other similar novels, I have to say that this book is as bad as *. Alas, people are more popular than people, so when you compare goods, you have to throw it away, say goodbye, and abandon it d(ŐдŐ๑)
Big cheers to the author. 😘
I read Chapter 5, and I felt that it seemed a little soulless at first, without that kind of passion. It felt like I was reading about daily life, and the most important situation was not written out. This is not a real review of the book, because I haven't finished it yet.
Let's change the name. Don't call it PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds. If you turn on Quanmai, you can hear it all over the map. Am I playing a fake PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds?
It's okay, let's see if there is a harem in the back
The more you look at the back, the less interesting it becomes! ! Too messy! ! You can see how those great masters started! ! I don't even know what you mean! ! As for time travel! You are now in that villa! I don't even know what planet that is! How did you travel through the past! ! Don't just write whatever comes to mind! This is very messy
To be honest, the overall feeling is not good and it looks a bit messy. I suggest that the author can learn from other people's works.
What did the author want to write about? It's so messy, it feels like it's been pieced together, and is it about mobile games or client games? Why do the voices in some mobile games appear in client games? Now that M762 is out, is there still a Quality Plaza? It feels like everything is messed up
Mobile game? There are also human-machine... The author's Pingying elite score is not very high... I can't write at the level of a master.
The male protagonist was given a house earlier, and he was not surprised at all. It was as if he knew it in advance. But I still give it 5 stars. After all, writing is not easy. ☺️
Where does the equipment come from in the containers outside the military base? You can't even skydive inside a cave!
There's no reason for the poor rating. I'm used to five stars. Besides reading so many chapters, how do I play the game? Why don't I start a game by myself after reading this?
It looks okay, but the author still needs to continue to practice his writing. The previous writing is a pool of stagnant water. The movements, psychology, and language are all very stiff, making it seem like reading the description directly. The pace is too fast and not delicate enough. Practice your writing more.
It makes no sense, I don't know what he is writing. Could it be that what the author is writing is not the same game as what I am playing, so why is it different from what I understand?
The front may be a bit messy, but it's healthy. I like it~
It's too chaotic, too fast-paced
Take a look here.
The writing is too verbose. It's still eunuch writing.
After reading the beginning, I was completely uninterested. The author still needs to work harder.