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Nice! Nice! Nice! Author, I came here from your other book "My Master is Super Fierce"

This book is also very interesting. It is based on the divine system. The protagonist accidentally merges with the system, and the system is only a medium-sized cosmic intelligence. You can take a look.

Good. The writing at the beginning is not very good, it smells like a sadist, and it feels a little frustrating to watch. The plot is good later on, the plot is interesting, the sense of substitution is strong, and the quality is okay, but it is a bit pretentious, but not too much. The thinking is clear, and it does not feel chaotic. It just feels that the progress is a bit slow. The scene description is better, the character details and the description of the fighting scenes are good, the world view is relatively large, there are dimensional spaces, and secret realms. When the time comes, I will probably go to other worlds. The system is not very good, the functions are relatively weak, I don't like to talk, and I abuse the owner. It is recommended to add a task function, otherwise it will feel like there are too few tricks. The protagonist, who is not the Virgin, is relatively cold and a little aggrieved at times, when she is controlled by the system. You can have a harem, but you have to manage your emotions well, don't be too scumbag, and find someone stronger. I can still read other aspects of this book.

It's very good. I have read your old book before. The writing is good, the structure is reasonable, the plot is ups and downs, fascinating, and the characters are described in detail. It is worth reading. Thank you for the author. Don't update too much every day. Just keep two updates a day. •͈ᴗ•͈ ♡

It's great to watch, and the plot is pretty good, but it's just a little weird. . But generally good

I hope the author can work hard. It's not easy to be original. The content of this book is very novel. Come on!

This book is also very beautiful. It is really hard for the author to update two books at the same time. I look forward to it.

Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง more updates, you are better and I see a lot more

I like it. I am reading both of the author's books. They are very good.

It's so good. I love it so much. I've received five-star reviews. I love this book.

Ah Xi, stinky Linzi, please update quickly!

It's very interesting. The plot doesn't feel cliche. The genre may be different. I personally think it's very interesting.

Not bad, good looking, come on, give you a little heart❤

People who come from old books. Well, I still think the protagonist of the old book is more amusing. The new book is also to my liking

It's very interesting. After reading books for more than ten years, I rarely come across this type of book. The beginning of it is a bit attractive to me. I hope it won't be too sloppy in the middle and later stages.

It's a very good book, a bit like "Spitting Starry Sky", but the style is different. It's very good. Come on, I'm worried because the updates are too slow.

I can only say that it is a four-star review. Is it a good article? The early stage is pretty good, but it depends on the follow-up? I feel that if you write urban articles, the cool points are always in the protagonist, low-key, and slap in the face. I feel like I should write less about the process of catching monsters in the secret realm. Personal opinion is pretty good😊

I've watched a lot of fantasy, so it's good to check out this new work on the future and system.

Author, although you update less. But your writing is really good. I hope you won't be too stressed and write well. Come on! ! ! I'm also following your two books👍👍👍

I personally think this book is quite good. The author writes it well and the content is attractive.

The author writes well, but I just can't get enough of it. I hope the author writes more every day.

Different from the old routines of previous books, it is more novel. If you are still looking for novels, you can try this one.

The writing is weak, but the plot is okay and the subject matter is readable. Regardless of the reviews, it seems like this, but it has surpassed more than 95% of the novels on this software. As a 12-year-old bookworm who is not too experienced, I still have certain opinions on the good things about novels. How can I say this novel? It is considered good in this kind of free novel app.

Come on, update the author. But there are some disadvantages. Nothing special. There's still energy. Not very big. I don't really want to see it either. Not that exciting. However, in order to encourage the author, I still gave it a five-star review. Hope the author can in the future. Inside the camphor tree. Write better.

Dear Sir, let me comment on your article. It is not decorated with gorgeous language, but touches readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, and the language is plain and not It is elegant, concise and full of implications, and it can be called a model article. It shows extraordinary literary skills in its plainness. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, I can't describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: Your novel is so touching, why don't you add more chapters?

The product produced by Erchen must be a high-quality product! It must be five stars, this must be very Lu Chen

Hmm... The process is very exciting, just like cheating, but it feels like everything is in vain. I still hope that there will be some challenge to the pig's feet, otherwise it will feel a bit like pig's feet dominating.

The writing is good, but there are too few chapters. I hope the author can write faster.

It's a very good novel. There are a few small flaws in the front that were picked out by readers. I hope the author will write more carefully in the future. I will follow it, but I have written too little now, which is a pity.

The writing is quite good, but I feel like it could be a little more novel and more imaginative.