The Life of Cultivating Immortals in an Atypical Otome Mobile Game

I humbly ask for a good review. Any suggestions are also welcome.

This book is a bit funny, hahahahaha, the author writes it well~ I hope that the female protagonist will become stronger and stronger and concentrate on her practice, while the male protagonist can be ignored or not, after all, the career will be more prosperous, author, I am optimistic about you~ Come on! ! !

Dangdang~ I can't wait to comment after reading the author's updated content. I particularly like the online game of Otome cultivating immortals. The big book inexplicably touched my point. I feel that the heroine's cultivation mode is a bit like "The Wind Rises in the Canglan", and I fell in love with it. The writing style is pretty good, a bit cute? Haha, I feel that there are some foreshadowings in the plot in advance, but there are not many updates yet and there is nothing to analyze. As for the characters, the heroine's behavior before joining the faction was a bit silly, but it was in line with the original character design. The targets that appear so far that can be conquered don't feel that their personalities are particularly obvious, nor are they not obvious, but they just don't feel easy to form an image in the mind. For example, the image of this white-faced braggart is very distinct. When I mention him, I think of a pink-faced bitch. Yi Ye's hobby, well, it feels like it appeared a little suddenly, as if it appeared specifically for the heroine to be better with him, but it still makes sense, and the connection doesn't feel coherent. Give it five stars first, wait and see in the front row, and look forward to the author's big updates.

I feel pretty good, but why are there so few people? Hey hey hey, I saw this novel of yours on the home page of Tomato. The name is very nice, and the heroine's character is also very Buddhist. Only then did the heroine realize that she is "comfortable with the status quo", hhhh! I believe the heroine will be stronger. Of course, like other readers, I hope there will be no cp, but why does the heroine have a good feelings guide~~~ Then there is Haixing. I hope you will follow the heroine well and conquer the world! ! ! Write more heroines (plot)~ Emmmmm! Five stars ❤ to the author

Very good, I hope there is no male protagonist

I think this novel is quite good!

This novel is really good, and it's among the top among the immortal novels I've read. Thank you to the author💪I'm looking forward to it very much! I believe your novel will become popular in the future. I hope the author will follow your wishes in writing your book! (But I still hope there won't be a male protagonist. Don't suggest it. It's purely my personal opinion. Hey, you don't have to adopt it.) Come on! (Stick to your own heart❤) Love you😘

Wow, that's interesting. I didn't expect this setting! I originally thought that I just found a novel with a heroine as the protagonist (⊙ꇴ⊙), which was fine. It was very fresh and had a good-looking heroine. \(//∇//)\. But it does feel like there are some holes that haven't been filled.

I like the protagonist's character very much

It was very interesting to write, I look forward to the next plot.

It's really well written, but I feel like it would be better if I could write more extras. The whole story goes quite smoothly, but there aren't too many fluctuations, for me.

Although the ending is a bit rushed, it's really fun to watch the heroine's growth!

I hope the author will continue to update. I particularly like the plot of this book, but while you are busy, you must also pay attention to your health.

Nice Looking forward to the author's next book ヾ(❀╹◡╹)ﾉ~

It looks okay so far

Maybe some pitfalls have not been added, and the follow-up explanation is not clear enough. There is no explanation about why Nan Guo is so good to the heroine in the follow-up of the Immortal World.