My Immortal Cultivation Life in an Unorthodox Otome Mobile Game

I humbly ask for a good review. Any suggestions are also welcome.

This book is a bit funny, hahahahaha, the author writes it well~ I hope that the female protagonist will become stronger and stronger and concentrate on her practice, while the male protagonist can be ignored or not, after all, the career will be more prosperous, author, I am optimistic about you~ Come on!!!

Dangdang~ I can't wait to comment after reading the author's updated content. I particularly like the online game of Otome cultivating immortals. The big book inexplicably touched my point. I feel that the heroine's cultivation mode is a bit like "The Wind Rises in the Canglan". I fell in love with it. The writing style is pretty good, a bit cute? Haha, I feel that there are some foreshadowings in the plot in advance, but there are not many updates yet and there is nothing to analyze. In terms of characters, the heroine's behavior before joining the faction was a bit silly, but it was very consistent with the original character design. The current targets that can be conquered don't feel that their personalities are particularly obvious, nor are they not obvious, but they just don't feel easy to form an image in the mind. For example, the image of this white-faced braggart is very distinct. When I mention him, I think of a pink-faced bitch. Yi Ye's hobby, well, it feels like it appeared a little suddenly, as if it appeared specifically for the heroine to be better with him, but it still makes sense, and the connection doesn't feel coherent. Give it five stars first, wait and see in the front row, and look forward to the author's big updates.

I feel pretty good, but why are there so few people? Hey hey hey, my dear, I saw your novel on the home page of Tomato. The name is very nice, and the heroine's personality is also very Buddhist. Only then did the heroine realize that she is "comfortable with the status quo", hhhh! I believe the heroine will be stronger. Of course, like other readers, I hope there will be no cp, but why is there a guide to liking the heroine?!! Write more about the heroine (plot) ~ Emmmmmm! Five stars ❤ to the author

I think this novel is quite good!

Very good, I hope there is no male protagonist

This novel is really good, and it's among the top among the immortal novels I've read. Thank you to the author💪I'm looking forward to it very much! I believe your novel will become popular in the future. I hope the author will follow your wishes in writing your book! (But I still hope there won't be a male protagonist. Don't suggest it. It's purely a personal idea. Hey, you don't have to adopt it.) Come on! (Stick to your own heart❤) Love you😘

Wow, that's interesting. I didn't expect this setting! I originally thought that I just found a novel with a heroine as the protagonist (⊙ꇴ⊙), which was fine. It was very fresh and had a good-looking heroine. \(//∇//)\. But it does feel like there are some holes that haven't been filled.

I like the protagonist's character very much

It's really well written, but I feel like it would be better if I could write more extras. The whole story goes quite smoothly, but there aren't too many fluctuations, for me.