Qin Ming, a country boy who had come to the city and was bracing himself for the harsh realities of life, joined a Myriad Worlds trading group. The Taishang Laojun, Tang San, Xiao Yan, the King of Hell, Black and White Impermanence, the lovely Diaochan, and the others in the group were so charming and pleasant to talk to.
Chang'e: “Immortal, that novel you gave me was so good. I'll invite you to our Heavenly Realm chat group.”
White Impermanence: “Hey, how about I trade you the Sadako I just caught on an island for that soul-storage pouch?”
Diaochan: “My lord, are we dating online?”
Lü Bu: “You old rogue Qin! Give me back Diaochan!”
I'm different from everyone else. When I shake my phone to find friends on WeChat, the people I find are great figures from all the worlds. The dirty talk I get up to spans the myriad worlds.
As a young lady born in the 2000s, I am very happy that I can be exposed to and try to write male novels. I hope everyone will support me. I will accept any good opinions. I love you all, okay😘😘😘
I am the 99-star power of the King of Glory. I recently had a desperate battle with the Hundred-Star V8 Being and was attacked by its ultimate move [Ultimate Secret: More Wealth and More Billions]. To get the diamond back, now I just need you, the author, to update more and keep me in a good state of mind. By then, I will be back on top. I am immortal and you are immortal too.
Bai Wuchang: At this level, I will take you away tonight
I feel that the author is not good at writing fighting plots. He often uses "directly...", "Again...", "One...", And rarely uses third-person pronouns. This affects the reading experience. (At least that's what I think). I hope the author can put more effort into the choice of words and sentences. As for the plot, since it's just the beginning, it's hard to comment, so I can only say it's true. However, the author's inner description is not careful enough. For example, Zhu Mengting's change had no foreshadowing at all, which made me think she was the heroine for a while. Until the sudden "change" later, it felt very abrupt to me. I don't know if it was a problem with the author's writing skills. I hope the author can pay more attention to these minor flaws. (Four-star wait and see, I will continue to watch. In addition, the above are all my own opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like it.)
Not bad o(*≧▽≦)ツ ~ ┴┴!!!!!
It's great. This is the best thing I've seen recently. Love you😘
The plot introduction is not too detailed, especially the part about Zhu Mengting. I hope it can be improved. Come on.
Another book was written to waste
Okay😊
Anyway, I recently heard from a friend that this software can be used to read many novels. I just read it a few days ago and I think this novel is very good, five stars.