The Vicious Female Apprentice of the Charming Immortal Lord

After reading it in two days, I feel that the heroine is quite miserable. Her life was designed by the master and she must always follow the trajectory set by the master. Her love and affection for the master may also be designed by the master. From a weak foundation-building monk to a powerful one who can transcend tribulations, after going through so much pain, he finally stood on that road and saw clearly his origin and return. The ending was unexpected. It turns out that her golden finger has a trace in her life, and she won't be able to get rid of it in the future. It feels very sad.

It looks good, but can the author write more about the interaction between the male and female protagonists? Kneel down and plead! Also, even if it's not a sweet pet novel, could you please write a little bit about the plot of the male protagonist doting on the female protagonist? Don't always write about the female protagonist killing people. This will make people feel very monotonous, and it will be easy for people to give up without interesting points. I sincerely request the author to accept my suggestions, thank you! Looking forward to your follow-up. 😁Come on😊💗

It's good to watch, but the ending has a big twist. The male protagonist looks cold, but is actually a hidden yandere and paranoid. Even the female protagonist and everything she has are derived from the settings of master Xie Jin.

A very interesting short story, a bit like the Invincible Upgrade Stream without a harem and only with a male protagonist. Although the male protagonist actually appears in more than 200 chapters, he only appears in a few dozen chapters. The male protagonist is a real heartthrob and hides a bit of a yandere attribute. The female protagonist's goal has always been very clear, which is to protect her master, who is the male protagonist. It is a very interesting short story. The author gives me a lot of encouragement (ღ♡‿♡ღ)

Personally I think it looks great and I recommend it. I also like the heroine design. Some readers feel that there are no emotional scenes and it is boring. The heroine has always been practicing. However, it is explained at the beginning of the book that the heroine is useless before she recovers her memory. The master is the bright moon in the sky and the fairy in the sky. No matter how much the heroine likes her, she has never thought of blasphemy. The reason that always motivates her to work hard to strengthen herself is to kill those whose memories blaspheme the master, so that the master can always be the bright moon in the sky, and others can only look up to this bright moon in the sky. So to a large extent, the heroine is either killing someone or on the way to kill someone. But the heroine is not the murderous type and has her own principles. It was only at the end that I discovered that Master also chose the female lead. It was really an unexpected surprise.

This book is so good, it's a proper story about a counterattack by a heroine, and she finally hugs the handsome man back. I also like the heroine's form. As long as someone dares to stop her, he will use his knife to cut a way out to prove his life and death.

I like the heroine Chi Hua very much! I also feel sorry for Chi Hua~ The author writes really well, he is very good at describing and naming, and the plot and details are described very well. The finale made me feel a little unexpected but reasonable. Anyway, it was very memorable after watching it. I just feel like the main character in this book is actually only the female protagonist. The heroine Chi Hua really makes me feel sorry for her. Her mission from beginning to end is to love and protect Master. After all, you are still the one in the game, you can't help yourself! In short, thank you to the author for his hard work! [Sending Hearts]

Everything is traceable. The reason why the heroine becomes the heroine is the choice of the hero, just like the ending: "According to human terms, I choose to let you gouge out your eyes, discard your ears, slit your throat, and abandon everything to love me. And I will love you so much. "

I like the subject matter, keep it up! First time commenting, overall I like it! Check it out for yourself!

It looks good, I love watching it, I like watching it. The heroine's growth process is very exciting, and at the end of the movie, the hero feels like a yandere. Overall, I personally like it quite a lot, and there are no outstanding points.

It's really wonderful, the process and ending are unexpected. The author is so imaginative

I think this book is very interesting. It is very inspiring for the vicious female protagonist to work hard to improve herself and protect her master! I just don't know what will happen in the future. I hope the author will update it soon! ! ! 😂😂😂

Although I didn't understand it very well, I felt sorry for the heroine. Also, there are too few male protagonists😄

Suitable for career review, with a little emotional line, this is suitable for writing a long article The dramatic ending was like a ridiculous drama. I was wrong. This is not suitable for career batches. It is a bit niche.

Very nice! I like to watch this kind of strong female protagonist and male protagonist without Mary Sue. But the ending is too fast, and I don't see much interaction between the male and female protagonist. It would be better if there are extra chapters later! ! ! 🤓🤓🤓

I danced and didn't understand, but I didn't feel it was clear.

I don't know what to say, but I like it

It looks good. Please write more. It's really good. The heroine is very sensible and not silly.

It's very interesting, but the ending is a little rushed and it ends without saying anything.

The subject matter is very attractive to me, saving the heart-throb master yyds who was pulled down from the altar. What the heroine did is really exciting, but the ending is hasty, the Xuanmen dealt with the heroine, and the heroine did not take revenge. The people in the cultivation world chased the heroine, but the heroine did not hurt the people in the cultivation world. She only killed the sword cultivator who blocked her path. Bad review here [eating melon], the language expression is a bit convoluted, but the plot is very powerful and very exciting

The heroine follows the path of pure killing. Before awakening, she was just a loser. Later, she used her sword to kill all obstacles in the world and found an invincible path. It seemed a little unkind in the early stage, but it improved a bit later on. But there is a reason for all this, and you will understand after reading it.

Very nice! ! ! The heroine has a non-procrastinating personality, makes decisions on the spot, and has a lot of personality.

The 5-star review is a bit short.

Good looking, worth recommending

It looks so good, hahahahaha(ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

It looks great. Is there any other finished article of the same type?

The reversal in the ending is chilling. It feels like all the meaning of the heroine's life has been taken away by the hero. It's quite unexpected and beautiful.

It feels pretty good, but it's a bit too bloody and violent, and the killings are heavy.

Oh, I just like master-disciple romance

I feel like the author might want to write without a male protagonist? In other words, it's similar to borrowing a sword style [laughing]