Quick Transmigration: The Novel Masterpiece System

I have never read a book with this style of writing before. How can I put it, the beginning is a little bit unreadable, but the author's writing style is good, and it is definitely not a novice! However, I personally suggest that when writing a book on Tomato, try to consider the age of the audience. In some places, the language description can be changed to be more straightforward and simpler. It would be better to split the narrative method from long sentences into short sentences. I personally must have been reading for at least ten years, and I don't like to read trivial or mindless articles, so I was attracted to it by your introduction. However, as a person in my twenties, I feel a little tired and panicked. I can only imagine what the children will think, don't you think? There is nothing wrong with the plot, but it would be better with a slight change in the narrative! Come on!

It's pretty good-looking, maybe it's good-looking to me. The writing style is pretty good, but I personally suggest that it be a little simpler and more straightforward. 😄😄

It's very beautiful, and the description of loneliness and depression is particularly resonant~

I thought Nianyou and Gu Xiaocai were the same person, because they were so similar! The character, origin, story, and behavior, including weapons, are all the same, and the corresponding male protagonist's character is just as bad. As a result... It turned out to be two people! And it seems that he has already seen Gu Xiaocai's ending

I really like watching Jade Bird's works, they are fantasy and fantasy and are full of humanistic atmosphere.

It's pretty good, it feels good. The plot development is very interesting and the content is substantial.

Are the male protagonists the same person? Hope not