Dragon Ball: Become the King of Saiyans

It's very suitable for a bookworm like me who loves Dragon Ball. I hope the protagonist doesn't have more than two harems later on. Overall it's pretty good *▽*

Awesome! After reading the ending of this story, I think it is the most unique ending among all the novels I have read so far! And after reading this novel, I have the same feeling as when I watched the ending of Dragon Ball GT, and I was very reluctant to let it go.

The Dragon Ball genre written by the author is novel. The only bad thing is that there are too few descriptions of the appearance, and the fighting scenes are not exciting enough. The author is great, I will support you, come on💪😇😇😇😇😄🤗🤗🤗🤗

After reading your novel, my heart cannot be calm for a long time! This story has novel conception, unique subject matter, clear paragraphs, strange plot, ups and downs, clear main line, fascinating, and shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. From the perspective of novel art, it may not be too successful, but its experimental significance is far greater than the success itself. A galloping horse, shooting a vulture and drawing a bow, heaven and earth are in my heart! You are worthy of being the new generation of pioneers in the Wu Li Tou world! It's you who rekindled the fire of hope in my heart. This is a rare thing to say! The sky has eyes, allowing me to watch such wonderful stories in my lifetime! It is like "the great sound sweeps away the shadows", like "pushing away the clouds and mist to see the blue sky", which makes us and others see hope. A bolt from the blue and enlightenment are not enough to describe the conception of the master's article; the clouds in Wushan and the flowing water in the Yangtze River are even harder to compare with the master's literary talent! Your candle illuminates the world, and you can see thousands of miles clearly; the rain and dew bring benefits to all directions! Through your profound words, I seem to see your majestic and heroic posture, looking at wolves and looking at wolves, walking like dragons and tigers; I seem to see your wisdom and demeanor, writing articles all over the world, holding a pen as big as a rafter; I seem to see your heroic spirit when you press your sword and look around, with countless mountains and rivers! How well you say it! I have been on the Internet for so many years, and I am not surprised by the so-called reading of countless people. But when I look at your momentum, I feel that you are fundamentally different from those little bastards who troll the Internet. Your melancholy tone, familiar signature, and lofty rhetoric are enough to prove your greatness. It is you who allow the spirit of the Chinese nation to be carried forward. Admire, admire!

The combat power analysis is clear. Successfully brought Dragon Ball closer to realistic science. But this is anime. In fact, the combat power should be reduced a bit. But it looks good.

This book is a very good fan fiction for Dragon Ball fans. And filled all the holes dug. Although some parts in the middle may make people feel a little brainless, from the reader's perspective, that is, from God's perspective, it would be reasonable if Lin Chen himself was included. By the way, reading this book reminded me of the days in junior high school when all the boys in the class took the Dragon Ball comic book and read it enthusiastically. Although I have only watched Z, GT and a few theatrical versions, I couldn't stand Super after watching it for a while, and I have also played the Dragon Ball Super games... It's really a time that will never come back. When reading this book, I still remember that I am gradually attracted to you. To be honest, Dragon Ball GT is a really good fanfic, and I really like the ending.

It's a good read, and all Dragon Ball fans should read it. This book has given me nearly five years of knowledge about Dragon Ball. Almost all of it is summarized in it, and there are some that I don't know. Recommended for real Dragon Ball fans to watch it. Dragon Ball fans should be very happy to see it, because they finally have a book about Dragon Ball Junior High.

This book is really good, the plot is touching, the characters are good, and the emotions are so delicate Anyway, it's great, great, great

It's very beautiful. This is the best among all the fan works. Other fan works are just like retelling the anime. The plot only accounts for 20%, but this one accounts for 90%.

This ending is really thoughtful and the author wrote it very well. Unfortunately, it took me 3 times to finish the game to give it a rating, but I still give it five stars.

Awesome, clear ideas, interesting ideas, successfully aroused the interest of Dragon Ball fans, the author will work hard to produce another masterpiece😋

This book is still okay. Many plots and combat effects are clearly explained. It is a good book for people who like to read Dragon Ball and is worth recommending!

This book is the best one among the many Dragon Ball books I have read.

I miss it so much! I first read the Dragon Ball manga more than 20 years ago, and later the animation. Very kind, young memories!

The author is rich in imagination and has made great efforts to adapt the original plot to bring freshness to readers.

The author's ideas are really clear and very beautiful. This is one of the few novels that I read and want to read again.

This is my first Dragon Ball novel. Very nice

A perfect book, I don't know why it only has an 8.7 Rating, and I've only read it for a few hours, so don't make random comments. I've read it 6 times and it's almost flawless. Most other Dragon Ball fans follow the plot of Dragon Ball and think about it with their own brains, accounting for 20% of the plot. But this book is almost all my own. It just uses the general plot of Dragon Ball and contains almost all the plots of Dragon Ball. It makes people never tire of it. Especially the ending is simply the finishing touch of Dragon Ball, which makes people remember it endlessly.

I'm a Dragon Ball fan! The overall structure of this book is very consistent with the original work, and reasonable explanations are given for all the things that the original work does not understand! Moreover, new ideas have been added, which is very clever, and it feels like this is the original work! It satisfied my fantasy about Dragon Ball, and it didn't end well, but I think I can still write a lot more. It just ended like this and I felt like something was missing. It's still unfinished! I believe many Dragon Ball fans have seen the one on the Internet where White God Goku and One-Punch Man are combined, as well as the part where King Quan and his two servants are combined! The ending will be better if you add this! After all, we are all curious about how strong King Quan is! What's it like to fight! And the great priests and angels! It would be very exciting if everyone came together to defend against the boss!

It's not bad, it's considered good in a fanfic, but there are some loopholes in the plot, such as where did the harmless version of Kaio Fist come from? It's a cool article, the protagonist is invincible until the end, and can quickly solve difficulties when encountering them. There are multiple female protagonists, and the origin of the system is explained.

This book is good, the plot is logical and respects the original work, and the ending is also very satisfying. I like it.

This one is indeed very good-looking, because I usually like to watch Dragon Ball Super, so I thought it would be very good-looking with the addition of the system, and then when I saw it, I realized wow, it is super good-looking.

I also imagine that I can transform into a Saiyan. He's so handsome. I'd like it.

This is the first book I have read on Tomato, and I have listened to it over and over again almost ten times. When I first came into contact with this novel, I had just finished reading Dragon Ball Super and was very familiar with the content. I read that the negative comments in the comment section are basically about "reducing combat power" and "opening a harem". Reducing combat power: Seriously, the numerical value has no meaning after the original Namek chapter. I have read another immortality novel that has been removed from the shelves. The protagonist is also of Saiyan blood. Every time I unlock a transformation, my literacy level increases by one. I feel really uncomfortable. What's the use of stacking it so high? I have to be deflated. If I don't feel deflated, what's the point of pushing it all the way? The infinite expansion of combined Zamasu's combat power in the original work is even more outrageous than that of the combined one. Before, Black Goku could abuse Super Blue at will, but the combined Zamasu punched the disintegrated normal Sorabe on the head. Shouldn't the two of them explode? Did they? Opening a harem: To be honest, the total number of these related contents is less than three chapters (the two weddings account for the majority). I feel that there is really nothing to worry about. It adds a bond to the protagonist, and the protagonist's wife also plays a key role in the finale (no specific spoilers) Let's talk about some of the advantages I think. The author's second design focuses on the transmission of super bloodline, magical skills, freedom and ultimate will, and the Dragon God has been extended. Then the plots related to parallel time and space are very interesting. The title of the spoiler is: Old Broly, the universe where Piccolo is the protagonist, GT Time and Space Kakarot, which contains some good personal designs by the author (old Broly is relatively small). Disadvantages: The super four lineage is exaggerated too high, maybe because the relationship between the opposing boss and GT is relatively close.

This is the first Dragon Ball fanfic I have read that I think is worthy of review. I personally like Dragon Ball very much. I have read all the series. The final battle strength in the article is still a bit jumpy, but it is not a big problem. After all, it is written like this. I did not expect it before reading this book. [Send Heart] It is very interesting. If I have not read Dragon Ball, I recommend Dragon Super Dragon Z Go check it out with GT to get a better understanding, and you can also look for GF's foreign extras, because there are transformations after Super 5 in it that are probably not much different, and overall it's very nice [Sending my heart]

The protagonist is very good and has a correct outlook on life, and there is no limit to destroying others! I'm a bit of a germaphobe and I like one-on-one relationships between men and women. The ending is great! See behind. The author made a reversal. The protagonist has two wives. Cheating on my feelings. There are a lot of wives, but the ending is very good. It started with Dragon Ball and ended with Dragon Ball.

The writing of this Dragon Ball is very good, and the combat power did not collapse in the later period. It also perfectly coordinated the timeline of all the various scripts that appear in Dragon Ball. It is very good and worth reading. [Cool][Cool][Cool]

It's very good, especially Chapter 27, which vividly shows Vegeta's competitive nature.

Very exciting, full of memories, I stayed up late for 5 days to read the whole book, like it👍

As a Dragon Ball fan, I think the plot content of this book is very clear, all the pits dug are buried, the transformation direction of the Saiyans is also in place, it is a fusion of GT and Dragon Ball Super, and the ending is okay. It is worth reading.