The little teacher unexpectedly received an ancient inheritance. From then on, he visited immortals and asked questions, starting a magnificent journey.
Reader comments
The concept is very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. If you write it slowly, you can at least produce a masterpiece with a thousand chapters! Otherwise, some of the skills inside can be more realistic and precious! Emotional scenes between men and women can be made more complex! There is a bit too little description of human nature, but overall it's okay.
Love oh so good
Although it's a little dull, overall it's okay, but it's too long.
The concept is very good, but the ending is a bit rushed. If you write it slowly, you can at least produce a masterpiece with a thousand chapters! Otherwise, some of the skills inside can be more realistic and precious! Emotional scenes between men and women can be made more complex! There is a bit too little description of human nature, but overall it's okay.
Love oh so good
Although it's a little dull, overall it's okay, but it's too long.