The Caveman's Moment of Transcendence

It's a bit lifeless, the writing is a bit lifeless, and the world view is not particularly complete. It's not easy to write about going back and forth between the two worlds.

Not bad Yaozheluo

Good! Very well written!

It's wonderfully written, and you can see that you have profound skills.

There is no sense of immersion, there are too many transitions, and there is no feeling. I can only say generally.

It looks great, good luck to the author!!!!!!!

Good,,,,,,

Beautiful and interesting

Not bad!

What about you?