[Prehistoric + Gods + Traveling Between Two Realms + Portable Space] Lying on the stone bed of the Wilderness Wind B&B, I fell asleep into the primitive world. Holding the bracelet blessed by the gods, he is the supreme messenger of God. Wild fruits that can cure all diseases, priceless gems, all kinds of magic, crossing two worlds. With the help of his portable space, he will become famous in both worlds...
Reader comments
It's a bit lifeless, the writing is a bit lifeless, and the world view is not particularly complete. It's not easy to write about going back and forth between the two worlds.
Not bad Yaozheluo
Good! Very well written!
It's wonderfully written, and you can see that you have profound skills.
Not bad!
Beautiful and interesting
Good,,,,,,
There is no sense of immersion, there are too many transitions, and there is no feeling. I can only say generally.
What about you?
It looks great, good luck to the author! ! ! ! ! ! !
It's a bit lifeless, the writing is a bit lifeless, and the world view is not particularly complete. It's not easy to write about going back and forth between the two worlds.
Not bad Yaozheluo
Good! Very well written!
It's wonderfully written, and you can see that you have profound skills.
Not bad!
Beautiful and interesting
Good,,,,,,
There is no sense of immersion, there are too many transitions, and there is no feeling. I can only say generally.
What about you?
It looks great, good luck to the author! ! ! ! ! ! !