I Am Seeking a Long Life in the Red Mansion

Because I like to read Red Mansions, even though I know a little about it, I still like it. When I saw the title of the book, I wanted to take a quick look. Many places in the book are also explained smoothly and smoothly. It is not stiff and it is quite interesting to read! Using metaphysics to explain it is also a new approach! But when the protagonist's name should have appeared in the book, another name appeared, which was puzzling! At least a few places!

It looks very comfortable. There is no sky full of gods and Buddhas from the beginning, and there is no gold finger that rushes to heaven and earth every second from the beginning. It seems that I have regained the sense of satisfaction that those writers who wrote about mortals cultivating immortals have regained. Ordinary people become immortals and conquer heaven. The epitome of the Red Mansion can be regarded as the ancestral home of Xianzhuo. I hope that the Red Mansion can be used as an introduction to create a background for stepping into the world of immortality. Cherish what you have at the moment!

This book is definitely okay. Although there are some details in the front that are inconsistent with the original work, it does not affect the perception. It is a very interesting book derived from Red Mansions. I hope it can wait until it is updated.

This book is actually okay in general, but if I remember correctly, Xue Pan came here after he was involved in a life lawsuit, so no matter how he changes now, he may be found out in the future. Will his teacher and uncle protect him by then? Shouldn't this be settled first? This is just my opinion

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The content is a bit slow, but it is indeed a good book. It is quite immersive. It is not just mindless. It is much more readable than a cool article. I can still give it a five-star rating. It is worth recommending. (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) Looking forward to updating soon, that shitty yellow button is annoying🙄

After reading more than a hundred chapters in one go from the first chapter, I can see the author's progress. It must be from reading everyone's comments. Compared with the beginning, the author's writing style has become more mature and rigorous. I look forward to the future content. Good luck, author＾0＾~

Let me comment on some issues; 1. This is a novel about cultivating immortals, The Red Mansion, which is equivalent to the background without much original content. 2. It's not a harem, there's only one heroine, and it's not like the Twelve Golden Hairpins in The Red Mansion. There's basically no heroine plot or dialogue about the heroine in the Red Mansion. 3. Personally, I think the first 100 chapters are very good, but I was a bit confused when I skipped to the cultivation stage. The first 300 chapters were about the Golden Elixir, then the 50th chapter of the Nascent Soul, and then suddenly I became an immortal, and then there was the prehistoric level Loose Immortal, the Golden Immortal Da Luo. 3. Red Mansions is the background. The plot of the original heroine of Red Mansions remains unchanged, and no heroines of Red Mansions have been included. Chapter 300: The Jia Mansion was ransacked 4. In the first hundred chapters, it is still very slow to pass the examination for scholar. Moreover, except for the first place in the imperial examination, there was no one in the top three. In the palace examination, he is not among the top three, two, and seventh. Not a cool article. But later on, cultivating immortals becomes a pleasure. Cultivating immortals and upgrading the golden elixir are slow at the front and extremely fast at the back. 5. There is no orthopedic content. Xue Baochai was married to the protagonist's best friend. 6. The writing is very good, but in the early stage it is really verbose and the exam can only explain one chapter.

In fact, I think this book is quite good. The author has ideas and the plot is not brainless.

Usually those who travel through are repairing the Jia family ship, which is leaking on all sides and has rotten decks? Fortunately, I will take advantage of the situation in the future, but you are going in the opposite direction! ! Want to see where you can go! ! ! ✍🏼✍🏼✍🏼✍🏼👁👁👁

The book is good, but the updates are too slow and too infrequent, which results in little gain. I only read it once in a long time, and gradually I felt that it didn't matter whether I read the book or not!

The name should be changed to, The author of Dream of Red Mansions is okay🐔The inner monologue of random thoughts [please savor it carefully]

How should I put it? Reading novels is not about reading original works. After all, there is a difference between novels and classics. Isn't reading novels just for relaxation and entertainment? The requirements cannot be too high. I won't compare this fanfic with the original work. At present, this novel should not be rated 8.3, It can be raised to 8.8. There are just a few updates, and there are still some holes that have not been filled. Xue Pan's murder case is an example. According to the author's thinking, Shui Qing is the heroine? Princess? Are you still thinking about whether you can marry Lin Daiyu? To put it aside, Jia Baoyu is not a good matchmaker, nor is he someone who can take responsibility. Now that Lin Ruhai has not passed away, can the author save him by writing an article later? If he didn't have S, Lin Daiyu wouldn't have such a tragic ending. (If you don't like it personally, don't spray it) The reason why I deducted one star is because I am afraid that the later writing will collapse, because there are often some novels that are very good at the beginning but become difficult to read in the middle and later stages. . . . . It's just too little, so I finished it quickly. . . . Update!

The language is relatively brisk and the rhythm is well controlled. However, the plot setting is still a little lacking and should be made more difficult. Moreover, this book avoids two common problems on the Internet. One is that it is too easy to get promoted too quickly, and the other is that there are too many wives. From this aspect, it is still very good. I hope it can be written better.

It's so beautiful, I can't put it down, and it's so well written! [Like][Like]

I have read this book several times, but when I saw the title, I had no desire to read it. I really didn't have any books to read, so I took a look and found out that it is indeed a good book of the same type. Maybe the author should change the title. The first 300 chapters of Red Mansion are good, but the next few hundred chapters are a bit boring. I basically skipped reading. Overall, it's okay.

I haven't watched much of it before but I started watching it from Qinglian Market. The plot is quite interesting. I like the Eternal Heavenly Boat in Wu Tomb and have found many similar ones. The protagonist can go to other worlds to preach and improve the status of the world to obtain merit, luck or the origin of heaven.

I saw the reminder without realizing it. Although there are some bland chapters, they are attractive enough to keep reading. That means there is still something worth reading. I look forward to the wonderful follow-up.

I was confused when I read Dream of Red Mansions. After reading the author's own opinions, I gained a deeper understanding of Dream of Red Mansions.

As for the previous part of The Red Mansion, it is very wonderfully written, and the author's writing style is also improving step by step. The latter part of the cultivation of immortality is also very wonderful, with a grand idea. For the Red Mansion fandom alone, it is worth reading. I have to say one thing, it's too wordy. Probably more than half of a chapter is nonsense, which cannot be said to be nonsense, just the author's analysis, narration and the like.

This book is interesting! The layout is huge! So far, there are two points: Red Mansion and Fairyland! Full of characters! Think rigorously! Quite wonderful! Big cheers for the author!

Emm, how should I put it, hehe, the author's idea is very interesting, and overall it's good. Unfortunately, the later plot style of the novel seems to have shifted from historical politics to fantasy and spiritual practice. As expected, this is still not to my liking to a certain extent. Although I haven't finished reading this novel in its entirety, I feel that it is quite novel and interesting as a fanfic of "Dream of Red Mansions", and to a certain extent, it can be read [learned].

The author's writing style is good. Personally, this novel feels a bit like a casual chat. If you like it, go for it. If you don't like it, don't complain.

I've read more than 300 chapters, but I haven't read the rest of Cultivation of Immortality. How can I put it, if you're short on books before 300 chapters, you can read it to pass the time.

It's okay, I have a solid foundation, but my personal opinion should be less subjective.

Very beautiful. I wait to see it every day.

Based on novelty and positivity. The three views are very correct, and the analysis of the historical background of the Red Mansion is very in-depth.

It's good-looking, and this fanfic makes it easy to feel like you're involved! I hope the author can work hard!

Of those 12 hairpins, you saved 3 of them [angry]

Anyway, I think it's easy to do, but I don't know what others think?