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A great book about artifact babies! The setting and plot are all novel, and the writing is not sloppy at all. It's really exciting to watch! ! ! But! ! ! But! ! ! But! ! ! It sucks! ! ! What a great book! ! ! It sucks! ! !

This book is so exciting. I am a big fan of Pokémon. It is very similar to the original book in many places.

A novel novel that brings me back to when I was a kid watching Pokémon. It also has the feel of an online game novel, but at the same time it's not too exaggerated, and there's no sense of a duel. I hope it won't be too beautiful or too far out of imagination. I beg you not to end it 😉

This book is very exciting. Don't read the table of contents, but read from the first chapter to the end. Don't look at the table of contents, don't look at the table of contents, don't look at the table of contents. Say important things four times

This book is very good. The ending is unexpected. I saw the rating dropped from 9.6 To 8.9. The content is not laggy and the pace is very fast. It's very refreshing.

! ! ! ! ! ! It's good to read. Although this book is bad, I have read it for the fourth time. It is a novel worth reading again. Except for the bad ending, everything else is very good.

That is to say, I really miss it. I really like this book. It was my introduction to Pokémon fandom. Although when I read it again after a long time, I feel that the writing is a bit immature, it can be regarded as the pioneering work of Pokémon reality. It was really refreshing when I read it. But the bad ending is hard to accept, so sad [almost crying]

It's very innovative and the content is better than ordinary novels.

It's really great, I highly recommend it, but the hasty ending is a bit unacceptable. I heard that something happened to the author's family. I hope you are safe and well together, and I hope to publish the next book after getting over the difficulty.

It's so good. 555555~ I can accept the ending again, but when will the author release a second part? 🍋

Without hesitation, this is the best book about Pokémon I have ever read. I hope the author will work hard and continue to create better works🤗🤗🤗

It's very interesting, but the ending is a little sloppy, and it's back to the beginning. I just hope there will be a second part. After all, there are not many novels about traveling into the world of Pokémon. When watching Pokémon anime, I don't catch the god's pet Ash Ketchum. It's possible in the novel, and it seems more comfortable.

Time flies, but I am back here again. This book really makes people feel excited. Several years later, I still like the relaxed and natural description of this book. I have read it 5 times, and I am still moved by the vivid characters in it. If the author really passes away unfortunately, I wish him to live in the elf world without hatred and pain in the next life. If he enters life, I wish him to find the happiness of his own human fireworks in the future. We all must live a good life😊

After so long, I thought of this novel again, only to realize that there has been no rating. It turns out that there are too many people giving it one star now. Although this novel is unfinished, the content is still worthy of a high rating, and the ending is far-fetched but not perfunctory. It is no better than winning the lottery. I am still looking forward to it when I think about it. I don't know how the author is now, but I still hope that the author sees so many people waiting for him, and he can come back and start a new chapter. Please don't let him be removed from the shelves at seven points. Thank you.

I like this kind of system-type novel very much. This is one of the few system-type novels I have read that I think is very good. In addition, I am also a pocket fan, so I give it five stars.

This is a very good novel. It has no ending. When you get to the last chapter, you can jump back to the first chapter and you can still connect. This is the biggest feature of this novel.

The content is exciting and the ending is very old-fashioned. You have a good card in your hand, but no one will get it. With the mythical beast in hand, Mewtwo takes action. One mistake brought it back. I really don't know how it will end, whether it is reincarnation or not?

It's very exciting, it's great, it's great. I like this book the most. I've read it 60 times, but I still like it very much. I can't even say that the author is awesome. Come on, author, I know you are working on the second season. Come on, Ollie. Can you add me on WeChat by the way? 😁️😁️😁️🙏️🙏️🙏️Come on, it's very exciting, very exciting, invincible, don't bother me, I'm going to watch and listen to it 70 times!

This is one of the best Pokémon books I have ever read. Although it is not finished, I am still willing to give it five stars (thank you for the happiness you have given me)

Sigh... How should I put it? This novel is the best and most serious book I have read in the past few years. I read it elsewhere and kept reading and chasing it. But I didn't expect that the time I saw it was the last update. Then I saw this novel again here. I never wanted to see this book, but I didn't know why. What made me click on this book again, but I dare not read it, because the ending is really unpleasant. When I saw that this book was not finished, I felt really sad, but maybe it was because of the feelings in my heart that I gave it five stars. I hope that I can encounter the second season in my lifetime, but the possibility is very small, as small as only one in ten thousand...

The author's imagination is very rich, especially the self-created Poké Ball (the one with his own skills) is very cool, so overall it's okay.

I read it a long time ago. It is an irreplaceable existence among all the Pokémon novels in my heart. It is an eternal classic.

Generally speaking, I recommend everyone to read it. The content can be said to be very attractive and often makes me "immerse myself in the scene". It's just that in this novel, Xiaozhi was tortured a bit miserably (actually, this is a small problem). What I care about most is that there is a "gorgeous" ending at the end. It is over when it reaches the climax, which leaves people unsatisfied (I must complain about this). The ending made me feel confused at first (it ended like this). I just hope that the author will publish the second part soon!

It's a very good-looking Pokémon. If you are a Pokémon fan, I can recommend this book. It's very exciting, but it ends too quickly. 😔😔

This is the first Pokémon book I read. I really like this book ( ͡σ̴̶̷̤. ͡σ̴̶̷̤)ෆ⃛Like you

Grave Sweeping is really the first book I read on Tomato, and it is already a masterpiece.

This was the first Pokémon fanfic I came across 5 or 6 years ago. I didn't finish it at the time, but I didn't expect to find it on Tomato.

This book is very well written. If it wasn't too late, I could keep reading. By the way, author, where do you live? I'll send you something

It looks very good, I hope the author can work hard. Many times when I read Pokémon books, I will read a paragraph. I hope the author will not give me a vast ocean in the future.

It's a rare high-quality Pokemon fanfic. Few people can write it in such a non-awkward way, but why is it so short? You can obviously write a million words! ! ! !