City ​​Lord

Except for the fact that there are too many female protagonists in the later period, the plot design is top-notch and the imagination is great. The combination of magic and the combination of collecting, upgrading and slaps in the face are perfectly depicted! Awesome

The beginning is well written, and the character of the protagonist is very well written to suit the public. I hope the following chapters will be better.

The writing is good. The plot has ups and downs. It is a bit innovative but not traditional. It is seriously a good book. It just has a lot of female protagonists, a harem but no stud.

I commented after reading the whole novel out of respect for the author. First of all, the writing is good all day long, the plot is very exciting, I like it very much; secondly, the female protagonists in the novel are beautifully written; thirdly, the characters of the brothers in Donghai are written a lot, especially the character Lin Bailu, which is very well written. Finally, let me talk about the shortcomings of the novel. The most important thing is that the male protagonist in the back is too affectionate, especially when he later falls in love with Zhong Li, who is in her 40s. It is really the biggest failure! Subverting three views. In addition, the line of Ocean Company has not been developed and explained, and there has been no development between the brothers in the East China Sea, which is a bit regretful. It was a good day, give me 5 points!

The writing is pretty good so far, it feels refreshing. I will continue reading. Good luck to the author.

Very good, the content is novel. I rarely see books like this. It's worth reading. Come on.

It is indeed a good article, mainly because the protagonist's feelings are very resonant, but there are other shortcomings, such as being a bit long-winded and bland.

Very good, thoughtful work. A book written by a person with very upright views makes people feel comfortable reading it. I haven't seen such high-quality work in a long time. I hope that future content will be of such high quality.

It's very good. I read it in one sitting. It's very contagious and makes the reader feel involved.

It's quite novel. It's the first time I've seen this type. It's good. I'll give it 5 stars.

I really admire the author's writing style and IQ! Definitely worth five stars!

I really like this type of book. It can be regarded as a Buddhist male protagonist. There is not much intrigue, and there is no bloody sword scene. There is just a harem that can be accepted or not. I hope the author will work harder and write more books like this.

The style is different from what I have seen before. It feels quite new. Keep reading.

It seems pretty down-to-earth at first, but I don't know how it will go in the follow-up. I hope the author will continue to work hard. 🙃🙃🙃

What can I say about this book? First of all, it is the type I like. It has an alien world and reflects reality until it is invincible. However, there is very little space in Alien World, and the reality is a bit too bland, so I dropped the book many times and picked it up again. The story is good, but it may be too long and may be boring to anyone who likes a simple life. But when I listened to the novel later, the effect was much better. All in all, this is a good work worth collecting. Good luck to the author.

It's very interesting, the ideas are good, the writing is charming, I can't stop reading.

The author's ideas are very good! Overall, it makes people want to keep reading.

It's been a long time since I've encountered a book like this that made me stay up late and keep reading. Come on, author!

It's a very good book. I like it. It's beautiful. I hope the author will work hard to write more books like this. I give it a thumbs up👍👍

I finally finished reading it. It's so well written. I still want to read it. The author really put his heart into it.

Although the writing about the alien world is not immersive, the writing about life is very detailed and feels good.

The rhythm is natural and compact, and the writing is humorous and natural. I haven't seen such a high-quality book in a long time!

It's very good, it doesn't highlight the protagonist as being particularly powerful, and it goes beyond the norm. I gave him some more golden fingers.

It's great. I like it very much. The protagonist is not stupid and the plot is not stupid. It's a very good book.

The writing is very good, but the pace is a bit slow, which is my favorite type! Come on!

I've read Chapter 16. It's really well written, delicate and interesting. It reminds me of the season when I was reading The Magic Apprentice! The rating is so low, only 8.9 Points, giving it five stars. I hope the subsequent plot will not disappoint! Seeing why this place only has 8.9 Points, I personally feel that it is too long-winded, the plot development is too bland and does not fit the theme, and the story is loose and I can't find the north... Rate it 3 stars and let's see if the subsequent plot can make people shine!

It's rare to find a peaceful inch of land amidst the shouting and shouting. Although there is no excitement of swords and swords, nor the system's mission reminders, the gentle and gentle performance makes people feel the same and leave a lingering aftertaste.

The writing is smooth, the content is rich, the characters are vividly drawn, and the inner emotions are real. Very nice.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist's character is too weak and too literary. Not as strong and energetic as young people. Also bike every day. Throw it away decisively

The book is very good, but the ending is too rushed and I didn't enjoy it!