Kinoshita**

This book has several shortcomings. First, the protagonist Shikamaru is a bit too cold and heartless, and there are very few readers who can accept it. Second, there are too many irrelevant narratives, and half of each chapter can be skipped. Third, there are too many changes to the original work. .

It's particularly beautiful. Shikamaru crushes the crowd, which is exciting. I hope the author can make more chapters, thank you!

The cover of this book is so cool! It's a bit lonely, and with the addition of the "Sixth Hokage", it feels like fighting the world alone! ! !

The intrigues and intrigues between ninjas are carefully depicted with delicate pen tips and bold ideas.

The first two chapters, the title of the novel! Beg!

Very good. The character description is relatively full. It doesn't give people the feeling of being a robot. It is not a virgin and it is not dehumanizing. It has its own thinking.

Perfect book, comfortable for readers

It's not bad, but sometimes I talk a little too much and talk about too many big principles, but in some places, I also talk a little bit just right. It's nice to finish one part and then write the other. Then I'm looking forward to which girl Shikamaru will choose?

Very cool, Shikamaru crushes everyone

The book is mixed with narrative and discussion, which not only depicts a real ninja world, but also highlights the protagonist's values. The grasp of details is just right. In addition, this book has unique insights in many places, which broadens the horizons of our readers. The characteristic of this book is that it presents truths in stories of fiction and reality.

The enemy is currently rattling

I feel okay after reading it now Wow, I'm really surprised. I'm gradually getting excited [licking the screen]

The characters are well described.

I just suddenly stopped writing. .

Very good, very beautiful

Like the protagonist setting

So far, more than ten chapters are okay

The brave man of the Demon King must not learn from the people of Wuling

It's pretty good, but it doesn't have an ending.

I loved this book from the first page. One picture explains the essence of the world.

Yeah, yeah, it looks good and quite appetizing.

The author has a very high IQ. This novel is very well written. The logic is rarely reasonable. Be able to justify yourself. Very good.