The Travels of Yun Xing

The author should have read a lot of books and has a rich vocabulary, but how should I put it? Most of the time these descriptions seem very deliberate, without that pleasing fluency, and look very awkward, with a lot of unrelated words piled together. The characters are not likable either, and the main character is not smart enough. I don't know who the heroine is. I see Qi Fang appearing the most so far. She is also stupid, naive, and quick to throw Q's, so it's hard for people to like her. I still like Han Li, a smart and alert protagonist who has a clear sense of revenge and grudges. Many of the plots and dialogues are rather blunt, and I have no desire to continue reading.

First of all, the writing skills of this book, the writing style can indeed be regarded as a fairy tale, the writing skills are solid, but there are also several shortcomings. In the middle period, I often skip scenes and map, and the ending is a bit too hasty. What deserves recognition is the writing skills. After 700 chapters It can be regarded as the climax of the whole book. The cultivation of immortality here is also very different from other cultivation of immortality. There is less intrigue in the sects. The people in the sect are more united and respect their teachers. It is also unique. I will give it a three-star review. I have finally finished reading it.

A good book, one of the few on Tomato. The writing skills are very solid, and the storyline is not flashy. However, it is not suitable for beginners or people with poor reading skills in ancient Chinese. It will feel unclear, but many of the fighting scenes are similar and complicated, which will make you tired to read it. It is already a good book!

After reading seventy or eighty chapters, I have no desire to continue reading. What is the significance of the prologue? The protagonist who has experienced traveling in the world is still a silly fool. How can you write about traveling in the world?

The writing is very good, but the protagonist is really a bad guy and has no defense at all. I jumped back many chapters and found that the protagonist has not changed at all. He probably will have this kind of character for a long time. I really can't stand it.

It's a rare antique writing style and the story is beautiful and worth collecting.

The reason for the low rating is probably that the identity of the protagonist is laid out too long at the beginning. The character of the protagonist is still a virgin and crying until the 50th picture. Who is a sixteen or seventeen-year-old man who has seen dead people and killed people and experienced so many things. He still looks like a virgin white lotus. The more I look at it, the more I feel it is not to my liking.

The style of writing is antique, and the writing style is also good. Sometimes the wording is ancient and ancient, and the wording is slightly deliberately pursuing gorgeousness. The connection between chapters and plots is a bit stiff, procrastinating, and there are not enough ups and downs. The narrative interludes are a little redundant. Looking forward to more great works.

The writing is delicate and logical. The protagonist has a psychological and mental growth process, and there is no inherent ridicule. The supporting characters are not mentally retarded.

The protagonist is indecisive and is also a virgin bitch, which is heart-wrenching to watch.