Flying on the clouds thousands of miles away,
Look at the misty wind, snow and rain.
The yin and yang rotate, the sun and the moon are bright,
But it's like a mediocre person's dream in the mountains.
Catastrophe is sweeping across, hundreds of families are falling apart, gods are destroyed, heaven and earth are in chaos, and things in the world are confused. Tens of thousands of years later, the storm will rise again, and calamity will reappear. Who is the one who deserves the calamity?
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Reader comments
The author should have read a lot of books and has a rich vocabulary, but how should I put it? Most of the time these descriptions seem very deliberate, without that pleasing fluency, and look very awkward, with a lot of unrelated words piled together. The characters are not likable either, and the main character is not smart enough. I don't know who the heroine is. I see Qi Fang appearing the most so far. She is also stupid, naive, and quick to throw Q's, so it's hard for people to like her. I still like Han Li, a smart and alert protagonist who has a clear sense of revenge and grudges. Many of the plots and dialogues are rather blunt, and I have no desire to continue reading.
First of all, the writing skills of this book, the writing style can indeed be regarded as a fairy tale, the writing skills are solid, but there are also several shortcomings. In the middle period, I often skip scenes and map, and the ending is a bit too hasty. What deserves recognition is the writing skills. After 700 chapters It can be regarded as the climax of the whole book. The cultivation of immortality here is also very different from other cultivation of immortality. There is less intrigue in the sects. The people in the sect are more united and respect their teachers. It is also unique. I will give it a three-star review. I have finally finished reading it.
After reading seventy or eighty chapters, I have no desire to continue reading. What is the significance of the prologue? The protagonist who has experienced traveling in the world is still a silly fool. How can you write about traveling in the world?
A good book, one of the few on Tomato. The writing skills are very solid, and the storyline is not flashy. However, it is not suitable for beginners or people with poor reading skills in ancient Chinese. It will feel unclear, but many of the fighting scenes are similar and complicated, which will make you tired to read it. It is already a good book!
The writing is very good, but the protagonist is really a bad guy and has no defense at all. I jumped back many chapters and found that the protagonist has not changed at all. He probably will have this kind of character for a long time. I really can't stand it.
It's a rare antique writing style and the story is beautiful and worth collecting.
The protagonist is indecisive and is also a virgin bitch, which is heart-wrenching to watch.
The reason for the low rating is probably that the identity of the protagonist is laid out too long at the beginning. The character of the protagonist is still a virgin and crying until the 50th picture. Who is a sixteen or seventeen-year-old man who has seen dead people and killed people and experienced so many things. He still looks like a virgin white lotus. The more I look at it, the more I feel it is not to my liking.
The writing is delicate and logical. The protagonist has a psychological and mental growth process, and there is no inherent ridicule. The supporting characters are not mentally retarded.
The style of writing is antique, and the writing style is also good. Sometimes the wording is ancient and ancient, and the wording is slightly deliberately pursuing gorgeousness. The connection between chapters and plots is a bit stiff, procrastinating, and there are not enough ups and downs. The narrative interludes are a little redundant. Looking forward to more great works.
1. If the protagonist is a bad good guy, I can give it 4-5 stars... After reading more than 50 chapters, I really can't stand it... In the world of immortality, it's hard to tolerate the immortality of the protagonist...
2. The storyline is a little bit blunt...
A very good book. I'm not procrastinating!
The only shortcoming of this book is that the fights are not exciting enough. Although the protagonist killed many people. . .
You can learn from the righteousness of "Lingshan" killing people.
Of course the author's writing is also very good. If everyone shoots the same thing, they won't be as exciting as they are.
It's just a show, but it's mostly a flattering reader who promotes himself. At first, I thought it was the character of the protagonist and his son, but it seems to be the character of the author. He has a good literary talent, so why not write prose instead of writing about cultivating immortals [vomit]
The author's literary level is very high, it deserves five stars.
It's a good book. The author's cultural background is very good. However, in this fast food era, it's too wordy and it's a bit difficult to read. I'm too tired after reading half of it. I'll put it away first.
This book is very good, there is no nonsense, no pretense, the opponents are all flesh and blood. The battle of magic weapons is like the list of gods. A rare good book.
The text narrative dialogue is quite ancient. It's just that the plot transition is a little smooth and the logical connection is not very clear.
Author, do you know what you wrote? ? !
The emotions, writing style, and conception are all very good. It is the best writing in this aspect that I have seen so far. However, the protagonist is too soft-hearted. Without the blessing of the protagonist's halo, nine lives will be lost in the complex world of rivers and lakes and immortality.
I have read countless novels about cultivating immortals, and this article is the closest to the traditional novels about cultivating immortals. It feels quite like Journey to the West. The layout, storyline, characters, magical powers, treasures and equipment, etc., Are all based on the author's profound literary skills, similar to the writing style of Journey to the West. Although it is a bit difficult at the beginning, the more you read, the more interesting it becomes.
Good novel, good story! I haven't seen such cool articles in a long time
This book has a heavenly charm at the top and a down-to-earth vibe at the bottom. It is a unique book. Interpret the heaven, earth and human world, and continue a song of immortals, gods and mortals!
Can be seen. I look forward to another new work by the author. This one was a pleasure to read.
The author's description of the Dao Meridian Cave and Treasure Fight alone is worth 5 stars. The writing is also of top quality in Tomato
I'm too lazy to type a comment, but it's pretty good anyway.
The writing is smooth and the ideas and scenes are intertwined. Wonderful
The protagonist line is very clear and the story is grand. There are too many characters involved, and many times I can't figure out which one is which😊The novel is indeed a brilliant novel, well, it's a bit brain-consuming, not bad😔😔
Yes, apart from the great battles among Xianxia novels, this one is pretty good.
Recommend good books, literary works, simple and vicissitudes of life. Please tell me, is Bai Suzhen the Golden Elixir or the Nascent Soul? Transform into a great demon.
The author should have read a lot of books and has a rich vocabulary, but how should I put it? Most of the time these descriptions seem very deliberate, without that pleasing fluency, and look very awkward, with a lot of unrelated words piled together. The characters are not likable either, and the main character is not smart enough. I don't know who the heroine is. I see Qi Fang appearing the most so far. She is also stupid, naive, and quick to throw Q's, so it's hard for people to like her. I still like Han Li, a smart and alert protagonist who has a clear sense of revenge and grudges. Many of the plots and dialogues are rather blunt, and I have no desire to continue reading.
First of all, the writing skills of this book, the writing style can indeed be regarded as a fairy tale, the writing skills are solid, but there are also several shortcomings. In the middle period, I often skip scenes and map, and the ending is a bit too hasty. What deserves recognition is the writing skills. After 700 chapters It can be regarded as the climax of the whole book. The cultivation of immortality here is also very different from other cultivation of immortality. There is less intrigue in the sects. The people in the sect are more united and respect their teachers. It is also unique. I will give it a three-star review. I have finally finished reading it.
After reading seventy or eighty chapters, I have no desire to continue reading. What is the significance of the prologue? The protagonist who has experienced traveling in the world is still a silly fool. How can you write about traveling in the world?
A good book, one of the few on Tomato. The writing skills are very solid, and the storyline is not flashy. However, it is not suitable for beginners or people with poor reading skills in ancient Chinese. It will feel unclear, but many of the fighting scenes are similar and complicated, which will make you tired to read it. It is already a good book!
The writing is very good, but the protagonist is really a bad guy and has no defense at all. I jumped back many chapters and found that the protagonist has not changed at all. He probably will have this kind of character for a long time. I really can't stand it.
It's a rare antique writing style and the story is beautiful and worth collecting.
The protagonist is indecisive and is also a virgin bitch, which is heart-wrenching to watch.
The reason for the low rating is probably that the identity of the protagonist is laid out too long at the beginning. The character of the protagonist is still a virgin and crying until the 50th picture. Who is a sixteen or seventeen-year-old man who has seen dead people and killed people and experienced so many things. He still looks like a virgin white lotus. The more I look at it, the more I feel it is not to my liking.
The writing is delicate and logical. The protagonist has a psychological and mental growth process, and there is no inherent ridicule. The supporting characters are not mentally retarded.
The style of writing is antique, and the writing style is also good. Sometimes the wording is ancient and ancient, and the wording is slightly deliberately pursuing gorgeousness. The connection between chapters and plots is a bit stiff, procrastinating, and there are not enough ups and downs. The narrative interludes are a little redundant. Looking forward to more great works.
1. If the protagonist is a bad good guy, I can give it 4-5 stars... After reading more than 50 chapters, I really can't stand it... In the world of immortality, it's hard to tolerate the immortality of the protagonist... 2. The storyline is a little bit blunt...
A very good book. I'm not procrastinating! The only shortcoming of this book is that the fights are not exciting enough. Although the protagonist killed many people. . . You can learn from the righteousness of "Lingshan" killing people. Of course the author's writing is also very good. If everyone shoots the same thing, they won't be as exciting as they are.
It's just a show, but it's mostly a flattering reader who promotes himself. At first, I thought it was the character of the protagonist and his son, but it seems to be the character of the author. He has a good literary talent, so why not write prose instead of writing about cultivating immortals [vomit]
The author's literary level is very high, it deserves five stars.
It's a good book. The author's cultural background is very good. However, in this fast food era, it's too wordy and it's a bit difficult to read. I'm too tired after reading half of it. I'll put it away first.
This book is very good, there is no nonsense, no pretense, the opponents are all flesh and blood. The battle of magic weapons is like the list of gods. A rare good book.
The text narrative dialogue is quite ancient. It's just that the plot transition is a little smooth and the logical connection is not very clear.
Author, do you know what you wrote? ? !
The emotions, writing style, and conception are all very good. It is the best writing in this aspect that I have seen so far. However, the protagonist is too soft-hearted. Without the blessing of the protagonist's halo, nine lives will be lost in the complex world of rivers and lakes and immortality.
I have read countless novels about cultivating immortals, and this article is the closest to the traditional novels about cultivating immortals. It feels quite like Journey to the West. The layout, storyline, characters, magical powers, treasures and equipment, etc., Are all based on the author's profound literary skills, similar to the writing style of Journey to the West. Although it is a bit difficult at the beginning, the more you read, the more interesting it becomes.
Good novel, good story! I haven't seen such cool articles in a long time
This book has a heavenly charm at the top and a down-to-earth vibe at the bottom. It is a unique book. Interpret the heaven, earth and human world, and continue a song of immortals, gods and mortals!
Can be seen. I look forward to another new work by the author. This one was a pleasure to read.
The author's description of the Dao Meridian Cave and Treasure Fight alone is worth 5 stars. The writing is also of top quality in Tomato
I'm too lazy to type a comment, but it's pretty good anyway.
The writing is smooth and the ideas and scenes are intertwined. Wonderful
The protagonist line is very clear and the story is grand. There are too many characters involved, and many times I can't figure out which one is which😊The novel is indeed a brilliant novel, well, it's a bit brain-consuming, not bad😔😔
Yes, apart from the great battles among Xianxia novels, this one is pretty good.
Recommend good books, literary works, simple and vicissitudes of life. Please tell me, is Bai Suzhen the Golden Elixir or the Nascent Soul? Transform into a great demon.
Excellent literary talent! Rare!