Heaven Falls**

The first three to four hundred chapters are very exciting, the world view is very good, and the early character settings are also okay. I thought this was a good Western fantasy novel (because there are too few Western fantasy novels, and there are not many good ones.) But I am very confused, does the male protagonist have a harem? Why would he tease other women about their engagements if he doesn't? Why did I only see Maya in the end, why were the other female supporting characters missing? My emotional outlook just collapsed! The experience is completely gone. But I still persisted (even though I skipped dozens of chapters that I didn't want to read, why did you almost lose the male protagonist and then travel back in time😡😡😡), but other things were good, but the emotional aspect was a bit poor. I can't put myself into my own shoes to understand your mood when writing the male protagonist. I hope you can work hard and I will pay close attention to you. I look forward to your new work, your progress and your success, and you will become a god soon😊☺😊

No one accompanies me at dusk, no one asks me whether the porridge is warm. No one turns out the lights with me, no one shares my book for half my life. No one is looking for me, no trace of snow is left on me, no one is treating me since my love is deep. No one will live forever with me, no one will sober up after thinking about me. No one wants me to stop singing, no one likes my sorrows and joys. No one wipes my tears, no one shares my joy. No one shared the wine with me, no one told me it was late at night. No one can accompany me to admire the bright moon, and no one can follow me to the end of the world.

You put the bank card on my left shoulder 😂 He whispered to me that he had no money 😂 What you said to me about having no money still echoes in my ears 😂 I don't have many complaints about you 😂 I just hope you can spend less 😂 --------------------------

It must be praised. This book describes a lot of things I want, but it is not modern enough. It would be better to publish a similar modern book.

A pretty good book.

Very nice book.

This novel was quite good when I read it before, but now that I think about it, does it feel different?

The author's writing is very good. The plot has not been developed yet. I look forward to the following content.

Well written book

Miraculous warmth

Very good, I like watching it

Not bad with personality.

Can you make the protagonist's abilities more awesome? It would be better if you can show off your abilities and slap the enemy in the face.

I just read the beginning, it's well written

It's really super pretty ￣ ￣)σ

Why are there so many foreign names?

Awesome my brother

The writing is not good, but the ideas are pretty good

I just like violent soldiers

A bit too much vernacular

I can still think that where are you and no one cares about me anymore?

Congratulations, share this, and bring the red envelope and wish everyone a Happy New Year.

Not bad, but the characters in each paragraph are a bit too small [face covering]

Keep up the good work and look forward to your new book

It's very well written, the type I like to read.

It's a very nice book, and friends who are book-hungry can add it to their collection.

It's very exciting, rich in content and storyline. The article is also very smooth.

This novel is good and worth reading

The writing is quite attractive, have a look and then comment!

It's okay, well written. It's just too short.