Miscellaneous Records of Immortals in the Tianqi Period

It's a bit too plain and the plot is protracted, but it reflects the author's profound literary literacy.

In fact, this book has nothing to do with the Great Tomorrow Apocalypse except for the title.

The literary talent is quite good, but the first chapter is like a chapter novel, which is verbose. Sometimes it focuses too much on describing the scenery, or explains too much, and some of it is unnecessary.

I will excerpt some words and phrases and apply them to the method of picking up girls another day. Thank you to the author.

It's okay, come on, come on

It's too wordy, but it's really well written.

In this impetuous environment, those who can finish reading this book are all people with great perseverance.

Literary Hualing has wonderful language and vivid and fluent articles.

This book is quite nice

It has such a flavor, it's fascinating

Good reading, good books, good articles,

Sunset red is a must

Not bad, you can keep watching.

Not bad, you can take a look

It's super exciting, very good

A very good serious book

Very beautiful and cultural.

What a great book!

The writing is good and worth paying attention to

Okay, but there are so few comments

Very good, very exciting, very beautiful.

Very good, I think it will work.

Very good book

The fairy book is considered a masterpiece, very good!

Is the author a ten-level old monster?

OK. Good luck to the protagonist! But making the matter of cultivating immortals too complicated? Tired? 😡🔑🔑🔑🔑🔑

Very good, very good, very good, very good

This is your instruction manual!

Respond to experiences, respond to circumstances, explore, and seek knowledge. Penetrating.

It's well written, and there aren't many fights that show their true nature. It's very comfortable to watch.