My Senior Sister Is the Martial Alliance Leader

It's not bad, it was really good at the beginning, but it turned around later and made me confused. Didn't the final ending mean that Su Yue and that group of people sacrificed themselves to save the apocalypse, but when the male protagonist was sighing, Su Yue was alive again? (Let me state in advance that the following are all my personal opinions) If I were to write, my ending would be like this. First, Su Xing knew that his role was indispensable, and he would definitely be heartbroken. Then Yamata no Orochi started to fight with Su Yue, but Su Yue was not an opponent. If Su Xing's vitality power was needed, just like the original text, the harem did not agree, Su Yue wanted to let them die, and then Su Xing stood up and used his own power. She exchanged her own life for theirs, but Su Yue couldn't do it. Su Xing held her hand and asked the system to transfer the life force. Suzhou's body gradually collapsed because of the loss of life force. When she was in Su Yue's arms, Su Yue felt that she fell in love with Su Xing, but nothing could come back. The script continued, and the soul of Su Yue's former junior brother would also invade his body. He was like Su Xing. He called him Senior Sister Su Yue, but Su Yue felt that his original junior brother was not as nice as Su Xing's name no matter how he called her Senior Sister. She also kept the blue and white porcelain as a gift from Su Xing to her so that no one could touch it. 20 Years later, Su Yue thought that she was very powerful and was frozen at the age of 24. On this day, when Su Yue was watching Pleasant Goat at home, she felt that someone was kneeling down in front of the mountain gate again, and the person who was kneeling said something. When the leader of the martial arts alliance accepted me as his disciple, Su Yue took a closer look and saw that the person kneeling down was exactly the same as President Su, and someone had sealed the memory of his going there. Su Yue's strength naturally relied on her ability to see his memory clearly. She found out that this person was the reincarnation of Su Xing. This made Su Yue extremely happy, but she soon became aloof. She teleported to the mountain gate and saw the man she fell in love with back then. If I don't write it anymore, if I don't write it again, I can publish a novel. I still hope that the author can write a follow-up. [Like]

After reading this book, I still don't know whether the main character is called Su Zhang or Su Xing.

The introduction said that his senior sister was a younger brother-in-law, but when this person traveled through time, it seemed that his senior sister was no longer a younger brother-in-law.

I was moved to tears. Thank you Tomato and the author for letting me see such a beautiful novel. I will say one last thing. Do you have any additional words?

Do you feel like the author has some misunderstanding about Di Gong? As far as I'm concerned, I just assume that I don't see any tendency to control my younger brother. At most, it's a sister's concern for her younger brother. Apart from this, there is no big problem, it feels pretty good, so four stars

And your Yunnan province overuses the water pressure machine to hook up and hook up with clothes. You call that surprised mobile phone to answer. Yes, where do you go to do it on the mobile phone?

It's actually very well written, but I don't know if there will be a follow-up.

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This book is very nice. It would be better if there were less inappropriate words and misleading things.

!!!! This wave is a bit awesome! Boy, what do you think? If you touch my clone, are you looking for death?