With his fists holding the mountains and rivers, and his feet stepping on the earth, the handsome boy embarks on the path of cultivating immortality, vowing to reach the top of martial arts.
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Nice. Worth a look
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Too much narration, too little dialogue, poor character presentation, and overall boring
Nice. Worth a look
Vivid character descriptions
Too much narration, too little dialogue, poor character presentation, and overall boring