Qin Xuan, a disciple of the fifth line of pseudo-spiritual roots, got a formation book by chance, and his destiny changed from then on. Cultivating immortality against the will of heaven and experiencing all kinds of hardships, Qin Xuan finally stood at the top and was proud of the world.
Reader comments
So wonderful, so awesome
The storyline is well arranged, the story transitions are prominent, and the scenes are closely connected. The characters have obvious personalities. The protagonist Qin Xuan is meticulous in four dimensions, has a calm personality, is diligent, can take things, can let them go, and moves forward courageously.
When he killed Zhao Ziyang, why didn't he ask Zhao Ziyang where the Setting Sun Technique (Five Elements Formation) came from.
You can continue writing, the content is still good, but the content is too short, and it will be gone when the elixir is formed.
Not bad, relatively solid. The rhythm is just right. The pace of cultivating immortality should not be fast, but it should also be enjoyable. Good grasp. Come on!
It looks good, but are there any chapters about the Nascent Soul stage or above? ? ?
So wonderful, so awesome
The storyline is well arranged, the story transitions are prominent, and the scenes are closely connected. The characters have obvious personalities. The protagonist Qin Xuan is meticulous in four dimensions, has a calm personality, is diligent, can take things, can let them go, and moves forward courageously.
When he killed Zhao Ziyang, why didn't he ask Zhao Ziyang where the Setting Sun Technique (Five Elements Formation) came from.
You can continue writing, the content is still good, but the content is too short, and it will be gone when the elixir is formed.
Not bad, relatively solid. The rhythm is just right. The pace of cultivating immortality should not be fast, but it should also be enjoyable. Good grasp. Come on!
It looks good, but are there any chapters about the Nascent Soul stage or above? ? ?
Very good, the plot is very creative
Good sense of immersion, not bad
OK! Wonderful moment!
Good, very good, very good.
Not bad, continue to produce good works
A very great book
The plot is good and well-founded
Okay, Zhengqi Taste
You can see, it's time to enter the palace
It's nice to be unique.
Yes, the plot has ups and downs
Not bad, keep up the good work
It's okay, but the ending is too sudden!