In his last life, he missed the closed beta test of the Infinite World server and missed the peak. This time, he will be reborn the day before the game starts, and he will never miss this opportunity. There will definitely be his throne at the pinnacle of the infinite world in the future!
Reader comments
First of all, this is not a cool article. If you want to read a cool article, you can go. The pace is really slow because there are many settings inserted in it. I would like to give some advice to the author. There are too many words in each paragraph. One paragraph has four or five lines. It is better to divide it into more paragraphs. We are not writing an essay. We don't need to write the same content into one paragraph. How can we feel comfortable? Personally, I feel that there are too many words in a paragraph and I can't explain it clearly, which is quite annoying.
1. Too wordy; 2. The protagonist system is too confusing, and the information and knowledge about rebirth cannot be fully utilized. It's not very satisfying either. Needs to be improved
To be honest, I read more than a hundred of them. As a reborn person, I still have more than one million points, and then I made a mess of my system. I knew that the system was messed up, but I insisted on not changing it. Bronze could barely beat Silver One, and then when Silver Three beat real Silver One, it was still very difficult. What are you trying to do? He also said that he can't beat the exchangers of the same level. Then you are a stupid student. I really can't stand it anymore.
It's too long-winded. Some things can be covered in one sentence, but there are so many things to write. Looking tired
It's good to watch, but sometimes it's a bit confusing to explain the protagonist's thoughts too much.
I can't read it, this is not an article at all, it's just comments and explanations about the entire film. I can't stand it.
It feels like a running account, not enough passion, and the words are a bit dry.
This book is recommended for people with an IQ of 120.
This is not a web article, it is a collection of inconsistent game settings and long explanatory texts. For the plot content of one chapter of a serious online article, this author would have to stuff at least three or four chapters of setting into it. The most heart-wrenching thing is that it took two or three chapters to talk about a setting, which I finally managed to digest, and then used two or three chapters to overturn this setting. At first I could persist, but after writing too much like this, I felt really uncomfortable and gave up.
This book is also called:
"Cultivation Instructions"
"World History"
"Legendary Item Identification Guide"
I read thirty or forty pictures, all of which are introductory texts. Those who are patient can read them slowly. If you want to watch the plot, you should give up as soon as possible if you don't have the patience.
It gave me a headache to read. I wrote a lot in the early stage and needed a voucher to buy something later. I didn't need it in the early stage of beta testing. Then the protagonist really didn't buy it! ! Since I didn't buy it, why did you write so much? He said that he wanted to go to the martial arts side first and then bought a lot of other side skills. When you see a supporting character introduced, you introduce him. He introduces it non-stop and introduces it laxly. At first he said he was great but then he said it was just like that. The data was the same. He said he had no points and then he went straight into the world and suddenly he had points. Every time Each character introduces a lot of NPCs, and then introduces a lot of NPCs thinking they are long-term NPCs or how useful the current time is. The world ends in a few chapters and that character has never appeared. It's really amazing👍🏻It's just like the composition I wrote in elementary school. It flows smoothly but nothing can be seen.
The game is set to be able to exchange game props with real conditions. This is the biggest flaw... So what is the difference between closed beta and public beta? If you have money, you will be rich. It cannot reflect the true meaning of the game.
I gave it full stars just to let you see my book review. Strictly speaking, I feel that this is not a novel, but an explanatory essay. It is full of various introductions. The overall feeling is a feeling of weakness, without any desire to read. If a book makes people have no desire to read, what is the meaning of this book? Especially this kind of online fast food novels, it must have some outstanding points, otherwise there will be no readers. OK, I don't want to complain anymore, the author NB
Warning to all book lovers, you are about to read a character introduction novel. Yes, you read it right, this is a character introduction novel, which introduces characters from the beginning to the end, whether it is a supporting character who lives for one chapter or a supporting character who lives for 100 chapters. His character introduction needs at least a whole chapter. To this extent, it can be considered a pioneering work. In the future, there may be a writing method called character introduction flow.
I gave up the book. The subject matter of this book is quite good and the writing style is not bad, but the main character's thoughts are different from those of normal people, which makes it uncomfortable.
The work is good, but the author has a racist tone, and the protagonist develops too quickly, and the plot develops too quickly.
The early stage was okay, but in the middle stage, the author suddenly made a big jump in his thinking. He jumped out of the game all at once, broke the barrier and entered the sea of consciousness. Then he skipped through the various stages of cultivating immortals and became the Taoist ancestor like a running account, and then jumped to cultivating immortals again. The ending was even more confusing and incomprehensible.
The writing is chaotic, with a hammer here and there, and dozens of chapters filled with explanations. Still, a setting is introduced for one or two chapters, and then abandoned. Things that are not necessary for the protagonist are also introduced, and there are even more character introductions, regardless of whether this character will never appear again in the next chapter. Looking at it can make you dizzy and angry.
I just want to know why the name of each chapter of the author seems to have only two words, obsessive-compulsive disorder?
First of all, this is not a cool article. If you want to read a cool article, you can go. The pace is really slow because there are many settings inserted in it. I would like to give some advice to the author. There are too many words in each paragraph. One paragraph has four or five lines. It is better to divide it into more paragraphs. We are not writing an essay. We don't need to write the same content into one paragraph. How can we feel comfortable? Personally, I feel that there are too many words in a paragraph and I can't explain it clearly, which is quite annoying.
1. Too wordy; 2. The protagonist system is too confusing, and the information and knowledge about rebirth cannot be fully utilized. It's not very satisfying either. Needs to be improved
To be honest, I read more than a hundred of them. As a reborn person, I still have more than one million points, and then I made a mess of my system. I knew that the system was messed up, but I insisted on not changing it. Bronze could barely beat Silver One, and then when Silver Three beat real Silver One, it was still very difficult. What are you trying to do? He also said that he can't beat the exchangers of the same level. Then you are a stupid student. I really can't stand it anymore.
It's too long-winded. Some things can be covered in one sentence, but there are so many things to write. Looking tired
It's good to watch, but sometimes it's a bit confusing to explain the protagonist's thoughts too much.
I can't read it, this is not an article at all, it's just comments and explanations about the entire film. I can't stand it.
It feels like a running account, not enough passion, and the words are a bit dry.
This book is recommended for people with an IQ of 120.
This is not a web article, it is a collection of inconsistent game settings and long explanatory texts. For the plot content of one chapter of a serious online article, this author would have to stuff at least three or four chapters of setting into it. The most heart-wrenching thing is that it took two or three chapters to talk about a setting, which I finally managed to digest, and then used two or three chapters to overturn this setting. At first I could persist, but after writing too much like this, I felt really uncomfortable and gave up.
This book is also called: "Cultivation Instructions" "World History" "Legendary Item Identification Guide"
I read thirty or forty pictures, all of which are introductory texts. Those who are patient can read them slowly. If you want to watch the plot, you should give up as soon as possible if you don't have the patience.
It gave me a headache to read. I wrote a lot in the early stage and needed a voucher to buy something later. I didn't need it in the early stage of beta testing. Then the protagonist really didn't buy it! ! Since I didn't buy it, why did you write so much? He said that he wanted to go to the martial arts side first and then bought a lot of other side skills. When you see a supporting character introduced, you introduce him. He introduces it non-stop and introduces it laxly. At first he said he was great but then he said it was just like that. The data was the same. He said he had no points and then he went straight into the world and suddenly he had points. Every time Each character introduces a lot of NPCs, and then introduces a lot of NPCs thinking they are long-term NPCs or how useful the current time is. The world ends in a few chapters and that character has never appeared. It's really amazing👍🏻It's just like the composition I wrote in elementary school. It flows smoothly but nothing can be seen.
The game is set to be able to exchange game props with real conditions. This is the biggest flaw... So what is the difference between closed beta and public beta? If you have money, you will be rich. It cannot reflect the true meaning of the game.
I gave it full stars just to let you see my book review. Strictly speaking, I feel that this is not a novel, but an explanatory essay. It is full of various introductions. The overall feeling is a feeling of weakness, without any desire to read. If a book makes people have no desire to read, what is the meaning of this book? Especially this kind of online fast food novels, it must have some outstanding points, otherwise there will be no readers. OK, I don't want to complain anymore, the author NB
Warning to all book lovers, you are about to read a character introduction novel. Yes, you read it right, this is a character introduction novel, which introduces characters from the beginning to the end, whether it is a supporting character who lives for one chapter or a supporting character who lives for 100 chapters. His character introduction needs at least a whole chapter. To this extent, it can be considered a pioneering work. In the future, there may be a writing method called character introduction flow.
I gave up the book. The subject matter of this book is quite good and the writing style is not bad, but the main character's thoughts are different from those of normal people, which makes it uncomfortable.
The work is good, but the author has a racist tone, and the protagonist develops too quickly, and the plot develops too quickly.
The early stage was okay, but in the middle stage, the author suddenly made a big jump in his thinking. He jumped out of the game all at once, broke the barrier and entered the sea of consciousness. Then he skipped through the various stages of cultivating immortals and became the Taoist ancestor like a running account, and then jumped to cultivating immortals again. The ending was even more confusing and incomprehensible.
The writing is chaotic, with a hammer here and there, and dozens of chapters filled with explanations. Still, a setting is introduced for one or two chapters, and then abandoned. Things that are not necessary for the protagonist are also introduced, and there are even more character introductions, regardless of whether this character will never appear again in the next chapter. Looking at it can make you dizzy and angry.
I just want to know why the name of each chapter of the author seems to have only two words, obsessive-compulsive disorder?