Great Adventures in an Infinite World

First of all, this is not a cool article. If you want to read a cool article, you can go. The pace is really slow because there are many settings inserted in it. I would like to give some advice to the author. There are too many words in each paragraph. One paragraph has four or five lines. It is better to divide it into more paragraphs. We are not writing an essay. We don't need to write the same content into one paragraph. How can we feel comfortable? Personally, I feel that there are too many words in a paragraph and I can't explain it clearly, which is quite annoying.

1. Too wordy; 2. The protagonist system is too confusing, and the information and knowledge about rebirth cannot be fully utilized. It's not very satisfying either. Needs to be improved

To be honest, I read more than a hundred of them. As a reborn person, I still have more than one million points, and then I made a mess of my system. I knew that the system was messed up, but I insisted on not changing it. Bronze could barely beat Silver One, and then when Silver Three beat real Silver One, it was still very difficult. What are you trying to do? He also said that he can't beat the exchangers of the same level. Then you are a stupid student. I really can't stand it anymore.

It's too long-winded. Some things can be covered in one sentence, but there are so many things to write. Looking tired

It's good to watch, but sometimes it's a bit confusing to explain the protagonist's thoughts too much.

This book is recommended for people with an IQ of 120.

I can't read it, this is not an article at all, it's just comments and explanations about the entire film. I can't stand it.

It feels like a running account, not enough passion, and the words are a bit dry.

It gave me a headache to read. I wrote a lot in the early stage and needed a voucher to buy something later. I didn't need it in the early stage of beta testing. Then the protagonist really didn't buy it!! Since I didn't buy it, why did you write so much? He said that he wanted to go to the martial arts side first and then bought a lot of other side skills. When you see a supporting character introduced, you introduce him. He introduces it non-stop and introduces it laxly. At first he said he was great but then he said it was just like that. The data was the same. He said he had no points and then he went straight into the world and suddenly he had points. Every time Each character introduces a lot of NPCs, and then introduces a lot of NPCs thinking they are long-term NPCs or how useful the current time is. The world ends in a few chapters and that character has never appeared. It's really amazing👍🏻It's just like the composition I wrote in elementary school. It flows smoothly but nothing can be seen.

I read thirty or forty pictures, all of which are introductory texts. Those who are patient can read them slowly. If you want to watch the plot, you should give up as soon as possible if you don't have the patience.