
System That Defies Heaven: Your Majesty, Please Lose Weight.
逆天系统:王爷,奴家减个肥
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 2.2M Words
- Genre
- Ancient Romance
- Subgenre
- Ancient Romance High-Concept
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
47Reads
7.4Score
1.1kChapters
13Listens
117.6kReads · all time





This really shocked me! The plot is too good. At first, I thought it was just like other novels. It was just a simple story: an unloved young lady fell in love with a good-for-nothing prince, and then there were fights in the house and in the palace. Then the prince became the emperor and the lady became the queen. The result surprised me! ! ! It turns out that his story has gone through so many twists and turns, especially the words in it, which are very emotional. The article is written very carefully, but there is one flaw, there are many typos. I think the rest is very good, well, that's it😊😊😊😘
"I have no regrets about meeting you, I have no regrets about joining hands with you, and I have no regrets about falling in love with you." This book is so good, worth reading, and the ending is touching 🤧
It's great, and the concept is unexpected. After all, as a fat person, I still feel the same way. I read a few episodes of the comics before reading the novel. Although the comics are a bit crude, I remember all the characters. Reading the novel is very immersive, nice!
It made me cry. To be honest, I don't really like this kind of novel, but the author's writing style is so good. The layout of the book is very grand, the emotions are very delicate, and there are no storylines that appear for no reason. Every character in the book is three-dimensional, and every plot is touching. Everyone in the world, personal love, and even a small character have their own endings. I really love it!
Finishing such a long novel shows its charm
A familiar plot condenses the essence of life, no matter the vicissitudes of the world, no matter how ups and downs it is. What controls people is the spirit and the unyielding will. In an ordinary world, ordinary people go through hardships, enjoy feelings, family and friendship, understand the basic elements of life, stand firm, let their thoughts fly, and be unrestrained. There are also days of low self-esteem and wandering, which pass by and turn into memories and wealth, tempering an unruly soul. The penetration of true feelings is the inexhaustible source of the novel's charm. Rereading it will give you a deeper understanding. After reading it roughly, I feel uncomfortable without vomiting.
At first, I thought it was a silly and sweet ordinary drama about chasing male gods to lose weight. Really, I never expected that it was actually two gods who died and came back to life, and lived and died again!
Personally, I think the writing is average and the plot is complete, but in some aspects it's cliche and far-fetched. The layout is grand and the design is clever. Each character has a clear image. If the author's writing style is better, he will portray a fuller character image. However, the author is very good at using straightforward and simple words to express the feelings of each character. This is very friendly for readers with strong imagination and who like to imagine scenes in their minds while reading, because too detailed description will limit the reader's imagination and make the imagination very tiring. However, the heroine's supposedly wise speech in the article did not resonate with me and did not reflect the power of the heroine's language. I just started reading this book to kill time when I was bored, because the thin description and many grammatical errors made it awkward to read. But I fell into this book step by step. I started reading it again and again. After a few years, I read this book again. I still don't know what attracted me and made me think of this book a few years later, so I have very complicated emotions about this book. Thinking about it carefully, I generally like this book, and I always feel that something in the book moved me. The obsession of several generations of love, the eternal faith for thousands of years, the absolute loyalty and trust, the struggles again and again, the unwavering will, as well as death, betrayal, despair, and illness, seem to condense all aspects of life, extract the essence of eternity and hope, and also separate out the dregs of ugliness and helplessness. After reading it, I felt very at ease, felt the beauty that I thought was illusory, and began to believe in eternity.
Reading is super exciting. The comic has been released. Everyone, go take a look! After the heroine lost weight, she became very beautiful.
I almost gave up on the book twice while reading, but after reading other readers' comments, I persisted in reading it. I was moved to tears several times in the book. The passion of soldiers, the unswerving love, the faith of the people, and the sincerity of friendship. A love that transcends ethnic groups and a love that transcends time and space. After reading it, I still feel longing for it.
It's so good, and it shocked me so much. The plot is so extraordinary that I feel like I don't want to read any other novels after reading it. The author also writes very well. The plot is not simple and always makes people unexpected.
I really like reading it and have been following it. I am also very moved. Many characters in it are very good. I like it very much and I have cried because sometimes the experience is very bumpy, and the author's language is very appropriate, very vivid and simple; unlike other novels, there is a lot of nonsense, many scattered characters, and many white lotus flowers. This novel does not have these. I am very relieved that I did not read it in vain. I have learned a lot and have a deep understanding: think before doing things, and don't do bad things. 😭
At first I thought it was just like the others, but I didn't know that the final boss episode was actually a system, which was really exciting. Especially the few words in the middle made me cry several times.
😂😂Where did Taobao go? I thought Xiaoxiao would be with Taobao.
Author, your writing is so wonderful that my tears flowed down in droves. It's too brutal at times, but overall it's pretty good. Recommend this book.
It's hard to describe. Although it has shortcomings, I still couldn't put it down until the end. It's an extremely rich story line and the plot has ups and downs. It comes from comics, but I still finished reading such a long novel. The love that penetrates into the bone marrow is touching, and the faith that comes first is admirable and makes me get goosebumps again and again. In short, this book brings many surprises, and the constant ties between people touch people from the bottom of my heart.
I'm so touched. They will never be separated in three lives and three reincarnations. The power of the nine armies is immortal. The four gods protect the goddess. The demons and humans live in harmony. The frontier and the mainland are on good terms. What a peaceful and beautiful prosperous age!
Finished reading, not bad
I really liked it, but my mind was a little confused when I read it. The heroine went back to the hero's past and back to the present time. It was a foreshadowing! It's really great! Dig the hole in front and fill it in later! Great author! I want to praise you. There was also a part that made me cry. It was when the heroine thought the system assessment was virtual, but in fact it was the moment when she stabbed the hero and threw him off the cliff. Oh my gosh, I know this is a routine! But my tear point is so low, it looks weird to me.
It looks great, I like it so much, I cried while watching it, oh my god, sometimes there are typos or omissions, which makes it uncomfortable to watch, but it doesn't stop me from liking it! !
It's so good, why is the rating so low? It's so sweet and so sad. I wouldn't have discovered this treasure book if I hadn't read the comics. It is recommended to read the novel. Only some parts of the comic are not as good as the novel. It is good to watch and worth investing in [Love]
It's a comic I read several years ago, and the comic is adapted from this novel. I think the writing style is actually pretty average, and the language in many places is very... Popular? But the plot is interesting and relatively novel. I haven't read many systematic books, mainly because I can't stand it. This is the only one that I can't stand. In terms of characterization, I still like the author's heroine very much. She doesn't feel sorry for herself, is extremely hard-working, and is very capable. What touched me very much is that the heroine is very kind. She did not sneer at the original person who gave up her life, but understood her very well. I really think this is better than many similar novels. First of all, the heroine did not snatch the original body, because the original body had already given up life at that time. Secondly, the heroine respected the original body and sympathized with all the torture she suffered as a sixteen-year-old girl. Including many details later, which can reflect the kindness of the heroine. The heroine has many beautiful qualities, I really like her. The world view is also quite big and interesting. I read a little of the comics when I was a kid but didn't finish them all. I didn't expect the world view to be so big later hahahahaha. So this book is not boring in terms of plot. I think the flaw in this book is that the heroine's relationship with the hero comes very suddenly. In fact, I don't understand how the heroine suddenly fell in love. Even if the system has always been attracted to the hero, why did the heroine fall in love so quickly? In fact, I can understand why the male protagonist likes the female protagonist. After all, it is the first time that the male protagonist meets someone who truly treats him. It's understandable to be tempted, but in the early stage, it felt like the heroine really focused a lot on the hero (?). I think this affected the viewing experience a bit, but the young couple is quite sweet, so it doesn't affect the love.
I like this book so much. I hope the author will continue to work hard and write more and better books for us book fans. Cheer you up
I read half of it and couldn't stand it anymore. I felt that the writing was messy. I ran out of books later on, so I just finished reading the second half. I just realized that I almost missed a big, big show! It's great, I think it's the best book ever!
I like sweet novels, but I could continue to listen to this one with the male and female protagonists being tortured. I thought I would give up halfway through, but I actually insisted on finishing it. It was not easy, and the male and female protagonists were too difficult. The female protagonist died and lived again several times. She was so strong.
It's well written, but I don't like some of the settings. It's sadistic and sweet, and my little heart can't stand it.
It's good to watch. The plot has ups and downs, twists and turns. Unexpectedly, Qingyu is a demon god and has become a god. The male and female protagonists are gods who have descended to earth and endured tribulations. They have to be together for love, and finally get married. There is also Xiaobai's promise to Concubine Hua's next life…………[snickering][snickering]👏👏👏💐💐💐💐💐
It's super beautiful. It's not as brainless as ordinary time travel. It's really shocking.
Can anyone tell me what chapter the ending of the manga would be if it were transferred to the novel?
It's pretty good. The only thing I can see is that the ending is a bit imperfect. I wish they both had become gods.