His Love: A Bone-Deep Scorch

Let's make an objective evaluation~ First of all, the storyline of the article is quite exciting. Although it is short, it is also very organized. I like it very much. However, it is also because it is short that the article seems to be a bit jumpy when reading, that is, many details are mentioned in one stroke. If it could be more detailed, maybe the story would be fuller. Hmm~ That's probably it~ Some small suggestions, hehe, please give the author a big boost. Looking forward to more of your works~(^_^)

Happiness is like this. After going through hardships, it becomes firmer and sweeter.

It's good-looking, a bit sadistic, and has few chapters, but the details are written very well😊😊😊I don't know how many times I cried ::>_<::. The author should work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ to write more good-looking books. 😁

I can only give this book 4 stars, why? Because I didn't pay attention to the details and some points in this book, the author can pay more attention to details in future books, and maybe it will be better. Secondly, this book has too many jumps, which makes it a bit headache to read and I can't figure out the direction! I hope the author can pay more attention to details in the future. Thank you for your hard work!

It's a nice, short story. In fact, it's the same in reality. As long as you still love me, I'll accept it.

Come on, author There are only 30 chapters and very little content, but the main plot is still very good. He's the kind of person who tortures people first and then sweetens them.

At the beginning, the male and female protagonists tortured their bodies and minds, but the ending... Was a bit simple...

It's good-looking, a bit sadistic, and has few chapters, but the details are written very well😊😊😊I don't know how many times I cried ::>_<::. The author should work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ to write more good-looking books. 😁

I tortured the female protagonist in the early stage and tortured the male protagonist in the later stage. Until I saw the back, I was full of this dog food. Although there are few chapters, the content is vivid and colorful, and all aspects of the characters are well described. However, there are also some shortcomings and some areas could actually be better (this is purely a small personal suggestion). I look forward to the author's next work!!! Thanks for your hard work!

It's good-looking, a bit sadistic, and has few chapters, but the details are written very well😊😊😊I don't know how many times I cried ::>_<::. The author should work hard ↖(^ω^)↗ to write more good-looking books. 😁