Legend has it that even the wicked woman who is hated by everyone and forces virtuous men into… well, no, forces men into marriage, can turn over a new leaf. Qin Suhuan stares at the sky in exasperation. This blasted pocket dimension is trying to force her into becoming a saint! Luckily, she has three older brothers who dote on her, so Qin Suhuan's life is pretty sweet. “Have you heard? The Tan family's young madam is going to give aid to us poor folk. Everyone, line up at the Tan residence tomorrow to collect grain.” Tan Ziming: What a kind girl! Qin Suxin: My sister is the best girl in the world! Qin Suhuan: I'm poor too. Could someone give me a hand? I don't want to be some saintly white lotus. I'm really broke, practically down to selling a kidney!
Personally, I think it looks good, but it's a bit short.
Well written, super exciting, beautiful, highly recommended!