The Haunted Tomb of Spirit Mediums

It looks good, the writing is very good, but the ending is too hasty, and the ending is just a hasty [face-covering] [face-covering]

It's well written. The author wrote the second part quickly. The ending was a bit too hasty and didn't explain anything. It's not satisfying to hand in the paper in a hurry.

It was pretty good, but the ending was too hasty.

It's very exciting, on the same level as the first third of Tomb Raider Notes. It's a pity that I stopped writing only half of the story. The last chapter is actually the outline of the story, so it doesn't create any pitfalls for the readers.

The content is well written, I like you

It's nice 🤭🤭 Good luck to the author, but it's too short.

Looks great, the story is wonderful