That relationship was doomed from the start. Their marriage was nothing more than a piece of paper, and on their wedding night, her new husband told her, “I married you only because I need an heir.”
Nie Baoyan was the evil supporting character between her husband and that red rose.
By the time she finally understood that she was powerless to save the marriage, her heart had long since wandered somewhere she couldn’t find.
One day, five years later--
At the foot of a skyscraper belonging to the Song Group, security stopped a chubby little child.
“Kid, you can’t just walk in here.”
“I’m here to find my dad.”
“Who’s your dad?”
“My dad is my dad, silly!”
“…”
“Mom said that once I’m grown up, I can find my dad and claim my share of the family fortune. Oh, and from now on, I’ll be the one paying your salary.”
The writing is good and the description part is very good. But the logic is not very rigorous! There are many serious bugs, such as: There is no reason why Lu Yihan drugged Song Yi. The Lu family and the Tong family are family friends, but the children don't know each other? There are also many changes in the character design that are not reasonable enough. Why did Nie Baoyan's original character design of a strong woman change into the thoughts of a divorced woman in the later stage? Since Nie Baoyan, Lin Xueer, and Tong Ran are close friends, don't they know each other's friends, family, and seniors? The villain Lin Bufan finally became an NPC and was dispensable. Originally, Nie Baoyan's career in his heart was Nie's company. He was afraid of the power of the Song family, so he completely ignored it in the later stage... The Nie family's cheap son was not explained, nor was Shen Nannan's mother and daughter. Tang Jin's love affair was too abrupt and had nothing to do with the main story, so it was completely unnecessary. Moreover, the author may not have a good understanding of the body and life of pregnant women. Body, beauty and life cannot match each other, and the methods for resolving all conflicts are too simple and crude. There is nothing that cannot be solved with one shot, there are two... If the logic is rigorous, the process of character development and psychological changes is still a good article.
It feels like the plot wasn't written by one person, and it feels like it's not connected. The character descriptions are awkward.
I feel like it's well written.