Laura Stuart, the greatest bishop of the British Puritan Church, blushed, "Sister, I love you, I love you so much, so I will tear your wings to pieces and set the shackles on your feet forever." Academy City Chairman Aleister Crowley said: "The plan...
Reader comments
The writing is quite good. It was originally a fan work of Magic Forbidden and Super Cannon, but Dassler appeared again, with other unfamiliar names, characters, backgrounds, etc. It makes the entire novel feel too complicated, requiring memorization of a lot of stuff.
It's originally a fan work, so if you add a few things, it's acceptable. But there are too many and any reader will feel bored.
Other than this, everything else is pretty good, such as logic.
I came here after reading the synopsis of Yandere Imprisonment with Two Female Leads. It didn't feel that interesting. The world in the author's mind was too confusing. I should watch less Fate series.
The writing is quite good. It was originally a fan work of Magic Forbidden and Super Cannon, but Dassler appeared again, with other unfamiliar names, characters, backgrounds, etc. It makes the entire novel feel too complicated, requiring memorization of a lot of stuff. It's originally a fan work, so if you add a few things, it's acceptable. But there are too many and any reader will feel bored. Other than this, everything else is pretty good, such as logic.
I came here after reading the synopsis of Yandere Imprisonment with Two Female Leads. It didn't feel that interesting. The world in the author's mind was too confusing. I should watch less Fate series.
Not bad