The Best Dan Fei Wants to Go Against the Will of Heaven

I haven't finished it yet, but the plot is quite in line with my type. I am also a person who loves writing. I am a small author on a certain platform. I suggest that the person who writes this book add more twists and turns between the rough experience of the heroine and the emotions of the hero and heroine. Don't keep it sweet from beginning to end.

The author is great! I particularly like this book. Everything the male protagonist silently does for the female protagonist represents his love for Ye Qingnian. Come on ^0＾~

The gangster and the male protagonist are so cute 😍

It's very good, but the chapters are a bit short. Other books are thousands and thousands in length.

It looks okay, but does her cultivation level come forward or backward? ? ? ? 😭😭😭

It's good. There's no other plot in the novel where an inexplicable master from outside the world assassinates the heroine for no apparent reason and then the hero turns out to be a person from the higher world. Every time I see this kind of plot, I feel like it's a bit of a drama. It's good, but I feel that the halo of the heroine is a little too big. The hero fell in love with the heroine for no reason, and his luck is too good. He loves the heroine regardless of the mythical beasts or artifacts, but it's pretty cool. I think I can be more ruthless in dealing with enemies.

This novel is very good. All the plots are in line with my personal preferences. The language is concise, no nonsense, the writing is serious, there is no dirty language, and the book is written in a civilized way. It's good

I like novels with few chapters

I just finished reading this book. Overall, I feel pretty good. However, I feel that the ending is a bit sloppy. I feel like I should write more details about the process. Then I felt that the heroine should actually develop her own power in the book, and then use it to gather information, assassinate people, etc. This way I feel that it would be more convenient in some places, otherwise there would be no need to trouble the evil king Xuan Yili. This is just a personal opinion, but this book is really good, whether it is content, plot or characters. Book lovers can follow it.

This book is okay. The first part is good, but the second part is a bit not so good. (^O^)

The heroine is true to her nature, she loves her as soon as she falls in love, and there is no pretense. The only shortcoming is that the ending is too hasty. The heroine's alchemy skills have not yet reached the strongest level, and her cultivation has not exceeded the scope of her knowledge.

It feels pretty good. Although the ending is a bit wrong and unpredictable, the whole story seems quite comfortable. The male and female protagonists have a good relationship. There are no so-called misunderstandings or quarrels, which is still good. The heroine has a very good personality and is crisp and clear-cut! If you are short on books, you can read it, but I wouldn't recommend it if you are serious about it! After all, no matter how good the material is, more than 200 chapters are not that rigorous!

. . Life and death are determined by destiny. Fat or thin depends on the sky.

Good-looking, super good-looking, good-looking

Okay, I didn't understand class at first, and I didn't understand it until I got to Chapter 30 or 40, but it's okay, this book

Well written. The author is great and has a great imagination, and the novels he writes are very novel and fantasy. It would be better if those annoying people could be eliminated by the heroine one by one earlier and not come out.

I like the name of the main character in this book. It sounds great.

The heroine came through time travel and brought with her her own "force value" and "alchemy skills". The heroine Zhu Xin is well done, Ye Qingyun, Jiang Xiaoyun, Ye Qingxue, Yue Cuiling, Shen Yu, Yue Shanghua. This book mainly tells the story of the female protagonist who, after reshaping her Dantian, cultivates and refines elixirs, falls in love with the male protagonist, and tortures the scumbag. The heroine's focus is indeed on alchemy, which is considered a talisman. The ending came too hastily, and some issues left over from the early stage were not explained clearly: the origin of the death energy, and Mo Qingchen's conspiracy.

It's very interesting, the uncle male protagonist and the cold female protagonist are very interesting.

Very good-looking. The heroine has a lot of luck. Nessah

It's so beautiful that I stayed up all night to read it! !

Except for the ending, which was a little too casual and a bit too fast, I enjoyed reading the rest of it.

The first chapters are pretty good, well-organized, but the middle chapters start to get a little messy, with a lot of pitfalls dug up, and then the chapters are straight through, and the ending is a little rushed. But looking at the entire story, it is still readable.

Not bad, not bad! Very nice!

Super beautiful, very beautiful

This book is okay!

Super pretty, pretty

Not bad, pretty good-looking

Okay, same routine

, Super beautiful and super exciting