Mecha War God

Although I have only read more than a hundred chapters, I think it is pretty good. The male protagonist constantly challenges and confronts, improves his cultivation, and strives for self-improvement, but he has too many romantic encounters.

The plot feels like it skipped a lot.

Not bad. I have the desire to read on.

Scribbling, there are only 12 solar terms in a year, who said that?

The language is concise.

How can I write well and how little can I write?

Too childish, the rich second generation slapped the slave in a bet

It's a mess behind

The plot is good and relatively novel

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