Reborn, I Refuse to Marry into a Rich Family

The author must be a novice! Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! There is a lot of room for improvement. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are very average (barely right), and the events are going askew (no revenge?). There is no full character setting in the character description, and there is no vivid feeling (not a familiar stranger, but a stranger you know). The heroine's occupation in the past and present life should be clearly stated and not vague (career/housewife). Many of the logical reasoning are not valid and are a bit nonsense. . . The whole article is immature. . Improve it!

I especially like to see it,

This book is very well written.