Her husband forced her to donate bone marrow to his ex, and then wanted her to donate a cornea to their child! (Follow the story above!)
At last, she realized he'd married her, a fat girl, for an ulterior motive!
A year later, she returned in a new identity, slim and stunning. This time, she swore to get revenge. She'd infiltrate the scumbag's family and take on him and his mistress.
No matter how hard she fought, though, a certain “older brother” was always at her side, looking after her with the utmost care. He even showed up to accompany her on blind dates. To one suitor, he said, “I have just one requirement: you have to cherish her even more than I do!”
The handsome suitor nodded. “Professor Du, I will!”
“Good. Now go buy that building over there and give it to her as a first-date present!”
“...” The suitor was dumbfounded.
“Can't do it? Then get lost!”
She watched her date flee in a panic, then exploded. “Brother, if you keep this up, I'll never get married!”
“Perfect. I'll support you for the rest of your life!” he said earnestly.
Years later, she splashed wine all over him in public. He merely smiled calmly and asked, “Feeling better now, sweetheart?”
She looked at him through tears. “Seeing you will never make me feel better!”
He loved her to the core, and she hated him with every fiber of her being. He had cruelly pushed the person she loved most off a rooftop just to have her, then said, “He deserved to die!”
“I'll hate you for the rest of my life!” she shouted in fury.
“As long as you remember me for the rest of your life, I don't care whether you love me or hate me!”
It doesn't look good. Your writing skills need training. The author should polish the text for readers to read. Otherwise, your readers will run away.
The story is good, but I want to know why the exciting parts are not there or deleted. Some parts are not connected and make it uncomfortable to watch. The scene where the party heroine and Jing danced and kissed was not written out, but skipped directly to the end of the dance. Was it deleted?
There were too many cuts, and many of them are unwritten. And some plots are too draggy. The heroine is just a pig-brained person and she even wants revenge.
It's super exciting, the plot is ups and downs, interlocking and wonderful.
Really pretty
Pretty good
Generally not good to look at
Looks good, come on
Sansan Sansan smiles so much