Star Core Dootian

First of all, the beginning is really good, the killing is decisive, the thinking is delicate, and it has the urge to read further. Why do you become a bitch after time travel? You are moved by the smallest thing, so just fight. What are you doing with so much nonsense? It's a matter of life and death, but I'm still showing mercy. Shouldn't I take advantage of your illness to kill you? If you can't fight, why don't you run? Are they all mentally retarded? The reason for posting this is not for anything else, I just don't want to see a novel with such a good subject being written to waste. Come on, author.

I quite like it, but it's just a bit too much nonsense and a bit too far-fetched. There's too much talk that I don't want to do. What I like the most is that it's not studded, it's not confusing, and it's a good idea.

Okay, what time do you want me to go to school when I tell you your name? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, no

The plot is good and there are too many catchphrases of "that, yes". If you remove that and yes, it will look much more comfortable.

Not a bad idea! Not a happy ending! Looking forward to the author's subsequent masterpieces.

The protagonist has become invincible along the way. Practice is still practice, boring.

The next step is to absorb spiritual energy and kill monsters. What about the boxing skills he learned and the domineering sword he finally obtained? Aren't these things that enhance his strength? Just the fist

It's not bad, but if the coherence and connection of each link are more in place, it will look better!

Personally, I think it's a very good app, with a lot of free books. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I'm very pleased😘

It's pretty good. I've read more than 50 fantasy novels of this type. This author's writing style is pretty good.

This book is very good, but it's too shaky

It is not unreasonable to use the Tao Te Ching as a golden finger for time travel, but there must be an explanation for the setting. It is a bit too simple. I hope the author will round it up later.

It's very well written. Whenever a male dog sees a woman, he can't walk. It annoys saints and male dogs the most.

Super exciting book worth reading.

I like the structure very much, but the wording is a bit sluggish and loses a bit of the look and feel...

Cool article worth reading, highly recommended

This book can be compared to the work of a great master, and it is endlessly memorable!

I'm so optimistic. I hope the author will publish more good books in the future.

It's so hard, but the system says it's blocking me!

You can set up a stall and put on makeup before

I watched until the end and hope the author will keep up the good work

There is still a little excitement in the plot development space⊙∀⊙!

The plot is okay, but I wonder what's behind it?

It just so happens that everything is fine with everyone.

It's very beautiful. I hope you can have more of it.

It's so hot on the eyes, ah, ah, my little cutie, my cutie

Fortunately, this realm has soared too fast. Is the plot able to catch up?

Kakaka, a little cold light shines in Kyushu

Often those who walk in the front will not reach the end, and those who are not prominent will often have the last laugh. Those who do not have a relationship with important people will not reach the end. This is true in real society, and this should be true in novels. Killing and teasing cannot solve the problem!

This book is very good, I hope everyone will read it