Star Core Battles the Heavens

First of all, the beginning is really good, the killing is decisive, the thinking is delicate, and it has the urge to read further. Why do you become a bitch after time travel? You are moved by the smallest thing, so just fight. What are you doing with so much nonsense? It's a matter of life and death, but I'm still showing mercy. Shouldn't I take advantage of your illness to kill you? If you can't fight, why don't you run? Are they all mentally retarded? The reason for posting this is not for anything else, I just don't want to see a novel with such a good subject being written to waste. Come on, author.

I quite like it, but it's just a bit too much nonsense and a bit too far-fetched. There's too much talk that I don't want to do. What I like the most is that it's not studded, it's not confusing, and it's a good idea.

Okay, what time do you want me to go to school when I tell you your name? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, no

The plot is good and there are too many catchphrases of "that, yes". If you remove that and yes, it will look much more comfortable.

Not a bad idea! Not a happy ending! Looking forward to the author's subsequent masterpieces.

It's not bad, but if the coherence and connection of each link are more in place, it will look better!

It's pretty good. I've read more than 50 fantasy novels of this type. This author's writing style is pretty good.

The next step is to absorb spiritual energy and kill monsters. What about the boxing skills he learned and the domineering sword he finally obtained? Aren't these things that enhance his strength? Just the fist

The protagonist has become invincible along the way. Practice is still practice, boring.

Personally, I think it's a very good app, with a lot of free books. As a bookworm for more than ten years, I'm very pleased😘