Become a Mortal*

It is written from simple to deep, and the plot is simple. Later, more dangers, hardships and miracles need to be added, and the content should be rich and colorful.

Literati pay attention to elegance, and leisure and fun secretly sprout inside and outside the study. A gentleman is even more happy because of the seasons. No matter how the four seasons intersect, he knows how to enjoy himself in the seasons, which is the way to travel between heaven and earth.

The content of the book is well written, but it is too busy at the end, which makes it feel like it is not finished yet, which makes people feel regretful after reading it.

This book is pretty good, I like it

This book is well written, the plot is compact and not sloppy. It's just that there are too many polyphonic characters that are read aloud incorrectly.

Not bad, it would be better to write more about finding medicinal herbs and collecting spiritual beasts

I just read it, and I can't say anything else, but I think it's very realistically written.

This book is very good and worth reading by everyone

Not bad, not bad. The clouds are fluttering and it's over! The author has worked hard, but he is still very down-to-earth, and it is the favorite of mortal cultivators! Like, like, like, like!

After watching too much blood and gore, it would be nice to change the genre. It's bland and serious about cultivating immortality, without much hatred. There are also many shortcomings. The protagonist treats the enemy mercifully and either hides or escapes, or bribes the opponent with benefits, and then everyone becomes friends, hahaha. . .

The plot is okay, but needs to be improved

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good.

Not bad! I'm not in the mood to comment and read a book [laughing] It's a pretty good book, but it ends too quickly.

It's okay to see this, it's well written.

It's good-looking, cost-effective and smooth, and the links are well connected. You can watch it carefully.

Beautiful and wonderful

It looks great, sounds great!

It's so well written, keep it up!

What hasn't been written about the Queen of Immortal Realm?

Damn it, where is the promised number one master in the fairy world?

It's very beautiful and worth recommending. I hope to create more masterpieces.

The author of this book has worked hard. The plot is very exciting. I like it.

Very good, a bit interesting

Very exciting plot

That's it? I wonder if the author suddenly fell ill and was unable to write.

It's wonderfully written!

I want to read the follow-up, please author please work harder

This book is good, but the pace is a bit fast and the writing is not delicate enough. It would be better if the descriptions are more colorful.

The writing is good and interesting, link by link, and it's exciting. After reading one chapter, I want to read the next one. It's a good book.