Naruto*****

Although it is a good book, there are many things that cannot be said. In the later stage, the author got confused while writing and accelerated the ending. This can be said to be a bad ending, but this way the plot is not too bad. Everything that needs to be written has been written. I have to say that the author is really talented. This is equivalent to relying on the plot in the early stage. In the middle and later stages, I edited it all by myself. However, the author's general summary of the previous one and the slow writing of a few words made me think that the author may update it slowly. It does not have an ending, but he is constantly improving, but the author has not updated it anymore. I look forward to your next work🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

The writing is very good, although the plot is a bit inconsistent, but the most important thing is that the author is not against Lily! I haven't seen Lily Wen on Tomato! Although the soul is a boy, I beg the author to write a lily essay! ! The author's writing style is really great. If I recommend it, it would be best if the heroine is a monster. Although it is unlikely, I still publish it because I really hope that the author will write a lily article! More real than pearls! !

It's really good to read. The more I read it in the middle, the more excited I became. It's now three o'clock in the morning. I've just finished reading it and I'm writing a book review. In terms of plot: Miss Liuli's story is very exciting, much better than the current brainless invincibles, and there are no bad slap-in-the-face plots or brainless harems. Writing style: The description is very delicate, and the characters appear very real. Sometimes when you look at it, you will think of some people in real life. You can also see the author's literary talent from some vocabulary, and the psychological description is even more detailed. Disadvantages: It's not finished (but it's understandable, who doesn't have to live anymore, right). Summary: In my mind, this novel can be regarded as the number one fanfic I have ever read. Although it has been a few years, I still look forward to the day when it will become a "serialized" book again. At least, it is worth waiting for me. Ps: This is my first time writing a book review. It's so good that I couldn't help it. I want to recommend it.

The beginning proves that the author knows Naruto very well, the content feels very novel, there are no old routines, and it is not very rigid. Finally, I would like to say, come on, author.

The author's writing ability is very strong, and he does not write like a cat or a tiger like the original work. The characters are described perfectly. I highly recommend (*˘˘*).｡.:*♡

Very nice, the only thing is that the author drives from time to time in the middle part

After watching it, I feel empty, just like Naruto's parallel time and space. It's very interesting.

I have read a lot of Naruto fan fiction, and this novel ranks among the top 5 fan fictions I have read.

This book is already pretty good among fanfics. It doesn't open up too hard. The main thing is that it has a relaxed and slow atmosphere. There is nothing slap in the face. The boring plot is not bad. Moreover, the protagonist upgrades and grows step by step. It is really excellent (//∇//)

The first eight things were average, and then in the middle, I would call it a masterpiece, but it started to fall apart a little at the end. It should have started to fall apart when the sickle said: I Know Your World, and then after Three Days of Endless Reincarnation, I felt that the author had begun to have some problems. Overall, this book is quite good. Although the length is very short, it seems easy to fall into it. Even if it is a bit broken at the end, when people read this book, they will feel that it is very deep and very charming. I am a reviewer. The above is my review of this book. If the subsequent writing is better, this book will be rated 9.2. It is not a question. Question, if you revise the front part, it may be even higher. To be honest, the middle of this book is really a masterpiece. She writes about the other side of Naruto. It is dark and cruel, but also makes people feel some warmth. She also fixes some bugs in Naruto. As for the ending, I think it should be written with some flaws. (For details, please refer to the ending of Fairy King 1) It makes people feel very perfect and warm, but also makes people feel a little regretful in their hearts. Then, after adding some true feelings and filling in some small flaws, this book is a well-deserved masterpiece, a perfect work. Even though the chapters are short, it makes people feel endless aftertaste.

It's so good, I beg the author to release a second season≧3≦

..., Although there are only a few points, the feeling is deeply expressed, with this kind of mood that cannot be expressed in words.

How should I put it? Although I have read this book for half a year, I always want to leave a comment every time I see this book on the bookshelf but I can't do it. It is a good book. Compared with other Naruto fanfics nowadays, which always focus on the system Sharingan, this book is much better. The relationship between the characters is not rigid, and the protagonist's IQ and online life experience are also very normal. There are also regrets, but The biggest pain point of this novel is that the ending is too hasty, which is one of the reasons why the rating is only 8.6. Although this book has been completed for a long time, I really want to see a better, richer, and more perfect ending. After all, the description of the Ninja Village in the Land of Snow has not been finished yet, but I guess not many people will see it after I have written so much. . . [Cry][cry][cry]

Through the analysis of the original work, the author restored and shaped the characters in a very reasonable way. Everyone was like flesh and blood, and re-depicted the world with their own understanding. Unfortunately, in the end, he may not have the royalties, or he may not have the energy to write it down. In the end, he ended hastily, leaving only the outline of the complete story. It is definitely better to write it down in detail.

Thank you author, it's very interesting. This is the first Naruto novel I've read. Although I finished it a long time ago, I used a guest account at the time. Now I'm back to add five stars [sending my heart]

A very excellent book. Even if I haven't read Naruto, I can still feel the author's deep understanding of the work Naruto. He dug out a lot of details and added his own understanding. This is really amazing. And the author's writing style is really great, and the characterization of the characters is meticulous. However, there are flaws in it due to some personal reasons, but I still like it very much! Nowadays, there are not many works that can portray characters in this way. Later, it can be seen that it is purely for love. I respect this. Although the ending is hasty, it is much better than the unfinished choices of most other authors. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! !

Five stars, five stars, very beautiful, friends who like it can go and see it together

I don't know how to express it, I don't know how to say it, but I really like this book. It's really well written. It brought away tears more than once and pushed the emotions to a climax. How can I put it, it makes the reader feel so tight that it really makes them feel uncomfortable. It touches the heart directly.

It's a very good novel. It's a pity that the author ran out of money and patience, so he didn't continue writing. Although it ended hastily, at least I know that the plot behind it has an ending.

It's a light lily novel with a good plot and a lot of fun that makes you want to read it. Although it fell apart in the end, overall it was still great.

Yes, sex change, the second world, but unfortunately I don't like the second world very much, but I really like sex change! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Writing style: ★★★★☆ Plot: ★★☆☆☆ Character: Four and a half stars Novelty: Four and a half stars Rating: A good Naruto fanfic, but there are other worlds (Note: The above ratings are all personal opinions) ps: I love sex! ! ! ! ! But I don't like having multiple worlds mixed together, woo woo woo, it's so hard to find a change of nature in Tomato, and I finally found a book with multiple worlds, but the book collapsed, woo woo woo o(╥╥)o

I feel that the main character is much better than other Naruto novels. At least his strength is gained through practice. Apart from the ending being too fast, it is still a very interesting book.

The ending was too rushed, which is a pity. But the subject matter is very novel. Although it is a Naruto fanfic, it tells a completely different world. It is not written around the original protagonist like most of them. On the contrary, most of the stories are based on the author's own understanding. A very special book, I personally like it very much. [Sending Hearts][Admiration]

It's very interesting. The writing text is different from other Naruto novels, and the content is also more rigorous. I recommend it!

Well, I only saw more than 400 pictures, and I can't stand the rest. There are too many. People often say that the latter part is a bit bad, and it is indeed too sloppy, but the author's early writing is really good. This is also my first book. I was very impressed when I read it. It was also the first lily I saw on Tomato. I was shocked when I read it. ο(=·ω＜=)☆Kira, and I also hope that the author will publish a new book.

It's a very good book. Although some reviews said it was bad, I still read it with anticipation.

I have reread it countless times. I can only say that this book is very good. Except for the slightly abrupt ending, the setting, concepts and characterization of the whole book are very good. The value of 225 hours of repeated reading

It's very comfortable to watch and has an indescribable feeling. But in the early stage, I felt it was a little bit weird, which I can't explain clearly, but I still think it looks good!

Personally, I feel that he is one of the better writers in the Naruto genre.

A very good Naruto time travel book, super exciting ヽ(爱´∀'爱)ノ