Heavenly Punishment*

Came here from Wuxian.

I read Wuxian, and I searched specifically for the author, who is very literary.

I started looking for Yiguang's other novels after reading "Wuxian". Because of his writing style and his characterization, I planned to read every one of his works. Sigh😔…The shortcoming is that the length of the novel is compromised by a lot of repetitive details. It's a pity.

Before Lingxia Mountain, I wanted to give up the book several times, but I resisted because of the writing style. After leaving Lingxia Mountain, I wrote better and better, until the part about leading the troops broke down again, but after that part, I read more and more fluently, and I couldn't stop. The writing style is excellent, and it is quite comfortable to read. It is not showy or frivolous. The plot is getting more and more interesting, and the ending is a matter of opinion. Personally, I think it's a lot better than Wuxian. The character portrayal and emotional transitions, even though I'm still drawing pictures, don't have the same boring feeling as Wuxian.

The writing is incisive, at least 9 points, and the rating is too low. This is the best-written book I have read in ten days!

The more I read the author's books, the more I like them. I would like to ask if the author has any other books besides this one.

Although it is made up, the characters are diverse, the language is humorous, the personality is distinctive, the story is well organized, reasonable and logical, better than Wu Xian, a five-star masterpiece, looking forward to the new chapter

It's pretty cool, why is it rated so low?

The writing is so good, it's rare

Tracer's calligraphy has beautiful words and high cultural content.

I came from Wuxian and came back to see the punishments from heaven.

The reason why this book has successfully attracted me to this day is mainly because of the author's great imagination. Humans are better than monsters! People are stronger than ghosts! Man will conquer God!

The author's two books feel slow-paced, and he is good at using the male protagonist's mouth to preach to the public and express the author's own views, which are acceptable and personally inspiring. Another feature of the book is that the author is very good at describing scenery and environments, and has good writing skills, especially four-character idioms.

It's suitable for fine grinding, and the transformation along the way is quite real. People make mistakes all the time, don't they? You and I are both mortal.

Well-conceived, unconventional, and worth reading

The author's writing style is very good and humorous... It wasn't very good at first, but the more I read, the more I liked it...

Let's talk about the character of the protagonist of this book first. Everyone should have read Mr. Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q. Yes, the protagonist is a Q through and through. As long as you look at it from this perspective, you won't think that the protagonist's words and deeds are weird, or even that he is an immature person. Because the protagonist is ah q. Taking pleasure in suffering is pitiful and pitiful. Not to mention Purple Smoke, many people say the protagonist is a fool. He is just the protagonist's spiritual victory method. Although it is wishful thinking, it is also his yearning

The writing is very good, the characters are vividly drawn, and the writing is full of flowers, and the writing is full of flowers!

It's very interesting. I've finished reading "Wuxian" and I'm following this book again. I'm addicted, haha.

Not bad, wonderful, beautiful

Very good book

As a bookworm of more than ten years, this novel is okay666

I like all the author's books, the writing is delicate and the stories are very readable!

Compared with a book whose name is easy to change, the garbage books written by Lin Zhi and others are more interesting.

A good book

It's okay, I'm not just making it up.

A good novel Very nice, not bad

Super super pretty! ! !

The tracer work is very good, I came from Wuxian

Learn from Zhu Xian and write more emotional dramas. I believe you will get better and better at writing. There are very few books with goals nowadays.