Undying Asura

The writing is very good. I hope the author can work hard to write better. Thank you for your novel that makes me no longer bored during the winter vacation.

You can read this paragraph before you criticize me. In fact, the author said before that this is his first work. It is understandable that there are shortcomings and they can be changed slowly.

I read this as a romance novel, the martial arts plot is also good, but I pay more attention to the romance, hehe

Yes, a very good book, it would be great if there was a sequel.

This novel is overall very good. Front. I wrote the wrong character's experience in the front, running about for a while, but the later part was a bit too anxious. Not all about kissing. But its selection of material is much stronger than some novels. It describes the protagonist's transformation from an unknown person to a famous figure. Finally, I hope the author can change the ending. This might be better. 😊😊😊😊😊

Watching Zhang Yan grow up little by little in the face of difficulties, showing his indomitable spirit! I also really like the content. The male protagonist is surrounded by beautiful women. It's really exciting just thinking about it! I especially want to read this book.

Although the ending was rushed, it was really fun to watch

It's so good, but the monologue is a bit too much. There should be more fighting scenes? Come on!

It was the first fantasy novel I read, and I thought it was pretty good. Now I'm reading it again.

Where did it go in the end? Can I have a second shot?