Journey to Immortality with a Beauty

Seeing Chapters 582 to 584, the Demon Sect is already besieging the sect, and the formation is extremely dangerous. The protagonist has already understood the situation on the way here. As soon as he meets the elders of Jade Girl Peak, he should first propose to see the Supreme Elder first, and then cure the Supreme Elder's illness. After understanding the current situation of the sect and discussing a plan to defend against the enemy, however, After meeting the elder of Jade Girl Peak, the protagonist is still introducing the people on both sides one by one. I have read a lot of urban cultivation novels. When rescuing the wounded, the patient only has 3 minutes to die and there is no way to save him. The peripheral personnel are still talking about something. The protagonist is too young and he understands traditional Chinese medicine. Can he be cured? Others said that there is no medical qualification certificate, it is illegal to practice medicine without a license, and other impossible topics. They talked for a long time, and the three minutes passed too early, and the patient was already dead. After talking for a long time, the protagonist came to treat the patient. With a storyline like this, I hope the author will not make stupid mistakes, so as to add points to his work. In conclusion, I put forward 3 points. ① After meeting the elder of Jade Girl Peak, the protagonist first proposes to meet the Supreme Elder first, and then cure the illness of the Supreme Elder. ② The protagonist knows the formation, repairs the formation or rearranges the formation. If there is not enough time to rearrange the formation, you can strengthen it based on the original formation. ③ Discuss countermeasures after the first two points. Here, when the author wants to write a novel, he should read more readers' comments and understand more about readers' thoughts and opinions, so that he can better conceive plots and ideas, and only then can he make his work perfect and leave no regrets. I just can't understand why the author made the protagonist get beaten and hunted everywhere. The protagonist's cultivation level is low. Why didn't he raise his cultivation level before leaving? If you want to show off, you have to make the protagonist invincible. I don't understand what the author is thinking. It makes readers nervous and shocked. How many people will read your work?

The overall feeling is okay, but I know that every time the people who ascend from the lower realm are in danger, and the young master of the upper heaven is behind me, I have never thought about providing some help to other women in the lower realm who may ascend. The skills and magic weapons are not clear enough.

A very nice novel, very delicately written and wonderful.

The author's conception is very clever and flexible, and the storyline is highly coherent. It is a good novel worth reading by everyone. It is well written from the beginning to the end, and there are constant twists and turns on the way of life and growth in the middle. The plot is well written, and it is worthy of everyone's understanding of life. It shows that the author's conception is very clever and flexible. Thank you, I have read it, and I think it is good, very good! Modern people write with messy ideas, but the author of this article connected everything in the writing process, the story has twists and turns, and the description of the characters everywhere is clever and flexible, which is exciting. In a word: a very interesting article worth reading.

This book is well written. The content and characters are very vividly described. There are very few oblique words. People who read the book seem to be very enthusiastic. I like it very much.

Well written and well done The writing is very suitable. I hope to publish more new works. Looking forward to it

I have watched the previous 4 movies and I will give you a score.

I've only watched the beginning now, and I think it's quite interesting. I'm looking forward to more exciting content in the following chapters.

From then on, the whole book was perfectly written, and the ending was also very satisfying. I liked it very much.

This is a pretty good fairy tale novel, all the pitfalls are filled in, and all the relatives have a happy ending! Thanks to the author! Perfect! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] Finished reading it in one sitting! Pretty good! How can I rate it above 9.5 Points?