Martial Arts: the Beginning and Huang Rong's Desert Island Survival

Why didn't he accept his own daughter in the first place? It's a bit of a bad review.

I want more people to see it

This part is really toxic. I feel like I don't have much passion to watch it anymore. I feel like the protagonist is just a picker of rags. It's not interesting. Some trolls shouldn't come to fight with me. This is my personal opinion.

Personally, I don't feel good about it. This time-travel system feels different. It feels like the protagonist has become Gauss himself, kind and weird.

Why does this Kingdom of Light smell like Naruto?

Blue hair and golden eyes are cute and good-looking. This is the highlight of the Moe King novel. If you don't know how to write, you go to a factory to screw in the sexless Moe King. When you write a sausage out of it, I want to put a sausage on your head. It's written for a fee. Do you think you are too confident or do you have too much kidney deficiency? If you can't write it, just don't write it.

During the siege of Guangmingding, Huang Rong had been dead for fifty or sixty years, and her daughter Guo Xiang had been dead for many years. You can tell by looking at how old Zhang Sanfeng was.

No matter how awesome the writing is, he is still not a picker of broken shoes! These authors on Feilu are really funny. They pretend to let people give their opinions, but when others mention them, they ignore them. In the past 5 or 6 years of Feilu, I have never seen any author take readers' suggestions seriously. Just thinking about getting rewards all day long!

Yao Yue even killed his own sister, so why not kill her and keep it to chop your chicken?

What the heck, you agreed to leave the island and restore Mingjiao, but you rushed to the Tongfu Inn. What's the use of writing so many chapters? You're selling your flesh on a sheep's head, the system is a chicken, and the protagonist is a waste among wastes.

Is this sword twenty-three serious? ? Just a sword light of more than ten feet? ? Is this a system copycat?

Are all male protagonists in current system novels eunuchs?

As the leader of the Ming Cult, the protagonist didn't have Ming Cuo martial arts at the beginning?

Most of the martial arts practitioners accepted Lin Pingzhi as their disciple. I just can't understand it. . . . . *. I just don't like it personally. . . It feels okay for now. I just hate Lin Pingzhi

I can't give birth to a boy, is there a Shen Nong?

Huang Rong has Guo Jing as her fiancé. He also went to hunt down the protagonist with Murong Fu alone. Still wearing no shoes on the boat. Barefoot, what happened to this character? There is a feeling of becoming a bitch.

Another martial arts story, a failure

At the beginning, Huang Rong, who was not a relative or even an enemy, was so nice, but no one was licking her*? This shouldn't be the case. According to Feilu's current trend, there should be a lot of people trolling, or maybe they were all deleted by the author.

One moment in the doomsday, one moment in prehistoric times, and one moment in the city, still working as a teacher. The author is digressing from the topic, but you time travel in five seconds! What was written?

A protagonist who is dominated by the system has completely unequal rewards for the options he chooses. Hasn't the system already given him a choice? It's better to just publish the task. Even if all the rewards are unknown, it's better than you.

Missing design? What is missing is manufacturing

The protagonist of this book feels like he has been kidnapped by the system. Whether he sleeps with a girl or not depends on the system.

The result is getting more and more fantasy... So fantasy that I don't even know what he wrote.

Take stock, take stock, don't you know how to write other than taking stock?

I want to know what the name of Kakashi's father is. Why do so many Naruto fans have different names? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Are you just speculating on Baidu Encyclopedia?

There are only a few cards in the game, but there are so many family members chatting all the time. It feels weird. Really, your novel is a bit unrealistic in Feilu.

I can't understand what kind of crazy chapters are written after 195 that are so serious.

That's nonsense too

In this case, I feel that the protagonist is a bit of a system slave. Without the system, he has no power. I hope the author can greatly improve it.