System! I Cultivate Immortality in a World of Superpowers
系统！异能世界我修仙
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 261k Words
- Subgenre
- Modern Cultivation
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
124Chapters
1.7MReads
497Flowers
10.0Score
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Reader comments 15
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I won't mention what has been said before by other book reviews. First, the plot is too abrupt. The overall feeling is that he awakens inexplicably and is accepted as a disciple for no reason, and then is reduced to running a stall. The whole thing is hard to understand. Second, there are no details. Readers only know what you have done, but not how. It is like a running account, and it looks boring. The subject matter is not new, but you have to find a way to write new ideas so that people will read it. To be honest, this book of yours would not have the slightest sense of disobedience even if it was 15 years ago in an era when little white literature was everywhere. So if you show the writing of 15 years ago to people today, they will naturally not feel it. Third, the characterization is not deep, and reading novels is nothing more than seeking a sense of empathy. I can't even tell who the protagonist is, what his personality is, or what his style of doing things, so naturally I have no sense of empathy. I can only say that the author has read few books, is young and has little experience, and still needs to hone his skills.
Your level. . . You've played too many games, right? Why is there not a king or a star behind Xingyao?
About "System!" Written by Ji Xiaofan. "I Cultivate Immortality in the World of Superpowers" Commentary on the chapter on the realm of cultivation in this book.
About "System!" Written by Ji Xiaofan. "I Cultivate Immortality in the World of Superpowers" The cultivators of immortality are so terrifying (please give me some feedback) Chapter review.
New author?? Keep up the good work
Is the author a newbie? I suggest you edit the first few chapters. I feel like the main character is too mentally retarded.
The author has a comic called Immortal Cultivator vs. Super Power. You can check it out.
I don't even want to read it. If the introduction wasn't okay, I would reluctantly go and watch it.
The author can take a look at the early stage of cultivating immortality in Yi Nian Eternal, it is really awesome!
Has anyone seen it? The data is so low (?╥ω╥`)