
National Martial Arts: the First Attack on Jiuyin, the NPC Female Hero Collapsed!
全民武侠:首冲九阴,NPC女侠崩溃了!
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- Completed
- Length
- 2.0M Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Gaming
- Subgenre
- Virtual MMORPG
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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7.3MReads
254.7kFlowers
10.0 · 19.7kScore
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When it comes to stocks, just trade stocks. When it writes about entertainment, it writes about entertainment. TMD also writes about photolithography machines. Just reading it makes me want to vomit. Starting with a photolithography machine drawing, the cost is zero and the materials are zero. It's really a hand-operated photolithography machine. Why are all Feilu novels like this? Can you not write about things you don't know? If you want to write, can you check the materials? It won't take more than ten minutes. Also** the starting photolithography machine drawings! I searched a lot for this stuff online. Do you want it? If you want it, I'll send it to you right away! Are you asking the professor to purchase materials for photolithography machines? Was this stuff written by someone? Wassenaar Agreement? Also, your writing style is like that of Shao Lingsiyu. If others don't understand it, you still need to look up the information. It doesn't take much, at least it will be enough to confuse laymen. What is this nonsense? Waste my money
What the hell, just kill a disciple of the Quanzhen Sect and make it known to the whole world? Why can the Quanzhen Sect do this? And what's the point of asking the police to come and arrest the players after killing them? ? ? If this happens, the gang will have a fight and lose and be killed by the enemy. If they win, the Guo family will beat them up! Obviously, this kind of player and martial arts affairs should be separated. The empire should be in charge of the common people, not the player martial arts. These should be mainly monitored. They have to deal with life and death. As long as they don't massacre the people, it's fine. Really, in the eyes of the empire, which sects are of no use, and which sects can't be destroyed if they dare to cause trouble and directly march the army to the border?
Forget about pretending, it's because my fiancée is pretty every time and I'm seduced. I want to be a minotaur so much. Anyway, I'm really convinced after seeing more than 200 chapters about pretending to be a woman because my woman was bullied. I wrote at least more than 80 chapters. It's enough to write this kind of thing once. I really treat others as stupid. Can I write it to a certain level? The key to the brainless pretense is to build on my own woman, and it's basically the same every time.
The deceptive introduction said it was a rejuvenating garment. The content is from the past life. A complete deception. Let's see how to show off with golden fingers. It turned out to be a second-guessing. A magical elixir that can even increase your internal strength. As a result, the protagonist was still at the bottom after eating. Basically there are typos in almost every chapter.
In the Wu Zong novel, do you use the skills in Naruto? Is it because the secret codes in Chinese martial arts novels cannot satisfy you or something?
By the way, having a Kaio Fist is better than the Eight Gates. The emergence of ninjutsu in martial arts is too weird!
Anyway, I always feel that the plot of taking my mother over, but Xie Daoyun has to go back to Jiangdong and come back again is really poisonous. If something happens, you are taking a risk with the heroine. . . . .
Is it necessary to talk about double standards? Double standards are nothing at all. Which person in power doesn't also label the author? Tell me, why only take stock of Tang San? Not counting them?
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Every day it becomes more and more like the real world, and then every day when entering the dungeon, the number of people is restricted, and there are not enough people to enter, and then the protagonist is forced to bring people with him. It is really like reality. And Yitian Sword is not used as a trump card. You don't need to change to a low-level equipment to brush a copy when you dnf a graduation weapon, right? Are your brains okay? Then write a mixed martial arts martial arts, and you have to get the Japanese Naruto to mix it in for the protagonist. Other martial arts protagonists use ninjutsu, right? This is the martial arts world. You can really write it. Do you have a Kouben?
A eunuch? I hope you will give birth to half as many children in the future
Where did the martial arts in the Nine Yin Manual go, and where did the ninety percent internal strength and mental methods go? It would be better to give Jiuyang a start. In terms of pure internal strength, Jiuyin is not as good as Jiuyang.
What the hell is Eight Gate Dunjia? Carry the next one away
I have never used Beiming Sheng Gong except when I first learned it.
The protagonist's IQ is not good. He believes whatever others say. He immediately believed it when he said he caught Huang Rong. He has no brain.
Sewer bugs! The writer's real-life fishing skills are vividly displayed! It's absolutely ****! ! ! !
In the world of high martial arts, there is almost no such thing as internal strength. Such as Fengyun. Because people don't need these things at all. What kind of nine yin and nine yang rely on the sky to slay the dragon? Blow up to the sky and take a heavenly sword to kill gods and Buddhas. Get a dragon-slaying knife and prepare to open up the vast world. This way of writing is simply **** to the extreme.
What kind of novel? I almost got poisoned after reading two chapters.
**, **Saying you** is simply an insult**.
All I can say is that it's too shabby. The first chapter was announced as being finished. It's a direct **. It's so uncomfortable for me as a reader, let alone a listener.
The realistic part of the plot is too much. If you can't write a realistic plot, you don't have to write it.
My hand is pointing at Jiuyin, is there something wrong with me?
The author's outline is not well written, and the realm of the characters behind is too confusing.
I just posted on Cai Xukun's Weibo the day before yesterday that you are so beautiful. Now I am always worried that I will be sent a lawyer's notice.
It looks awkward, but it's also a bit flattering. But what the heck is Wei Wuxian playing Du Laman? Isn't he a guy? You said before that unless you become a guy, you can't get enough? Ling: The character breakdown is a bit serious, it's really embarrassing.
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