A mountain of corpses and a sea of blood, if that's what it takes to achieve my goal, then bring it on. I can bear the blood debts, the curses, the hatred, and the condemnation, until I die or find my way home.
"You demon! I was so wrong about you. Haven't you killed enough?"
"I'm sorry. I just want to go home. If your lives can get me home, then I'll gladly become an executioner and slaughter you all."
"Just so you can go home! You killed all those people?" "Yes." "You demon! May you sink into despair for all eternity. I curse you, I condemn you!"
This novel and its characters are entirely fictional. Any resemblance to real people or events is purely coincidental. Do not imitate.
Generally speaking, the writing style needs to be improved. A novel is not a composition, so you have to pay attention to the spacing, but the subject matter is the rare black soul. Come on, I am optimistic about you.
The background of this book is all about Dark Souls, the originator of Souls-like games!!! I was lucky enough to play Dark Souls III and reached the 3rd week.
If the author is a newbie. It is not recommended to use the theme of Dark Souls. What can I say about this subject? The plot is difficult to control. If you are not an experienced player or have read the plot analysis. I almost don't know what the plot is.
Commentary on Chapter 34: The Blacksmith's Doubts in "The Soul of Death" written by Yan Roo about his life.
There has been progress, but the paragraphs are still a bit long. It would be nice if they were simplified. Come on, you will definitely be popular.
I've given you monthly tickets, flowers, and reviews. Although it's not much, it's still a little encouragement. Come on, young man.
Commentary on the first chapter of YOU DIED, "The Soul of Death" written by Yan Geo about his life.
Come on, although the writing is a bit poor, I have to praise you for having the courage to write about Dark Souls. After all, it is an unpopular subject. I hope you can express your thoughts in the book. However, I feel that you are a bit unable to grasp the rhythm of the collapse. After all, Dark Souls is not that easy to write.