I, Monkey D. Luffy, Don't Want the Straw Hat!

There may be political darkness and some extreme people in the Navy, but the vast majority of people are righteous. And what about pirates? Ninety-nine out of a hundred are thugs, and the few who go to sea for their dreams are also based on the suffering of civilians. Roger, redhead, hat, white beard, etc. Appear to be good people, but in fact they are only self-centered. They only care about their companions and other people related to them, and they never do things regardless of the consequences.

Speechless, saying that the navy is justice and pirates are evil is completely nonsense. There is no absolute good or evil in the world of One Piece.

The navy can use Ace to publicize that the navy has found the great secret treasure. Without the great secret treasure, the power of pirates will weaken, and it can also reduce some pirates. It can also reduce the birth of pirates. At the same time, it also shows the generosity of the navy. It only arrests those evil people and does not implicate innocent people. If you want to be a navy, as long as you are kind-hearted, even if you are a descendant of pirates, anyone can join.

Ruoyouruowuo system, a protagonist with a very weak sense of presence, long-winded words, forty chapters, the protagonist's sense of presence is still so weak, and the pace is so slow*, it makes me anxious, I dare to say this, your book Sooner or later it has to be cut, so you might as well cut it as soon as possible and see how other One Piece novels are written and learn from it. Reading a Pirates fanfic is not just about watching the protagonist make up for regrets or have a good time. You grinding and whining won't feel good at all.

Even if the navy is bad, only a few people will die, but pirates will massacre villages at every turn, and Roger will massacre a country. How many scum does it take for the navy to kill a country's people?

It's so confusing, the system that appears and disappears suddenly, the fruit that has no effect at all when eaten, the protagonist who has very few roles, does the author have an outline for writing a book?

I prefer this kind of pirate world where the main character is a marine.

In terms of writing skills, it's okay. Personally, my writing style is passable. I don't comment on whether your views on Roger are right or wrong, but in my opinion your views are untenable. It's not very convincing and it's hard to agree. The same goes for Luffy's three views - he doesn't comment on right or wrong, and he can't stand firm. And here's why I don't want to continue watching: Something like a Saiyan blood blended into a Devil Fruit... No matter how you explain it, it doesn't hold up. This setting is really D! Word count per chapter is a big issue. I don't ask you to write 3,000 words for each chapter, but you don't want me to read it three times before getting to the next chapter, right? Chapter word count is poorly allocated! Senses are greatly affected Animation characters are the protagonists of "Travelers"... Everyone has their own preferences. We can embody some characters, but some people really can't embody them. After you finish writing, you can hold on for a while, but your writing is average...

Don't use your brain when reading this novel, otherwise you will feel that the author doesn't treat you as a human being

Saiyans are the fruits of everyone. . . . I laughed