
National Fishing: I Am the Devil of the Black Pit
全民垂钓:我是黑坑大魔王
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 236k Words
- Genre
- Urban Romance
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Audience
- For men
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
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1.9MReads
70.5kFlowers
10.0 · 4.4kScore
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Is his body particularly strong? If the body is not strong, it will turn into fly ash at super-light speed.
Let me teach you how to play Zongheng It's actually quite simple, just add a space between the two characters Fei Lu. You know how to type the spaces. Other types of special characters are the same as Fei Lu.
If the author doesn't update, he must want to be beaten to his knees by readers.
Since the prehistoric world where the protagonist is located is the highest world, then the small worlds in his chat can be said to be born and destroyed in the blink of an eye. What's more, time flows at different speeds, making it seem like thousands of years have passed since the prehistoric era, but it seems like only a few days have passed in his small world. If this is done, what is the use of the chat system created by the protagonist? It has been thousands of years since ancient times, but he has only been there for a few years, so why conquer the world and talk about how to ascend the dimension! Even the way you write flashbacks is not like this. The way you intersperse them with you is too off-screen.
To be honest, the author still wanted to watch Attack on Titan when he wrote it, but I didn't like some of the settings. For example, if the protagonist brings a lolita and calls the protagonist brother, it would be okay, but if the protagonist brings a man and calls him brother, it would feel exx. Also, bringing one person would be enough, but in the end, he brings so many. Not to mention that the protagonist needs power, it only means that the system is weak and the protagonist is weak, which is not pleasant at all! Author, your setting is very problematic for Feilu.
Author, you know how to write hydrology. It takes nearly three chapters to describe a slap in the face, which is also amazing. Keep up the good work and keep it up.
Hey, anyone who reads the book but doesn't add it to favorites, doesn't vote for flowers, doesn't comment, and doesn't vote for evaluation is all Cai Xukun.
征服王的性格完全不对,他不会脸绿只会哈哈大笑然后说金皮卡你上榜了,所以作者笔下的人物ooc了,哪怕面对乖离剑征服王并不会怕
For example: Minotaur Ichigo's Death Song The Great Merciful and Great Compassionate Naruto's Salvation Record Luffy's Palace on the Sea Works like this are also acceptable, right? Also, a lot of butter content can also be converted into subscripts. Example: Magical glasses, female thief Filushi, country fantasy, office fantasy, corruption, lust, etc. There are also classic ones You can also draw things like the Dark Bible.
The dialogue is too brainless. If you don't know how to write, write less dialogue with the characters. Fighting enemies, smiling and saying, "I'm giving you a friendly reminder" and "I'm going to beat you up if you're not good enough." It's like a child making a fight. If you don't give me a toy, I'm going to beat you up. Talk less, do more.
It's good to write! It also contains a lot of connotations about the idiots and idiots in the courtyard, why should they let go of the opportunity to let the beasts die. What Mr. Yi did is to set up a private court to prosecute the emperor, and there is also the deaf old lady who deceived the five-guarantee households and pretended to be a martyr, and the idiot who stole the national finance with questionable qualities. They will be killed in a minute! And you are still a high official, any one of you can kill them.
Give a small snake a critical hit and get a divine dragon. It is completely possible to mass-produce mythical beasts such as Pixiu, Kirin, etc. Then every woman will have one!
At this time, 51 years is simply a God-given opportunity. You can make plans now. You can do anything now. You can hide behind the scenes. You can create an immortal family.
Hurry up and write out the battle between Saitama and Kami.
I feel very bad. The cultivation methods and unique methods that the protagonist knew were directly stolen by the so-called empress herself, without even naming the protagonist. Is this really good? ? This is harming the protagonist and benefiting others. At least this empress is a bit proud and arrogant. Don't tell her if you know it. Just know it yourself.
I think it's pretty well written.
The character of the protagonist is very good. He is not an idiot who is obsessed with lust and lust, and he does not forcibly reduce his intelligence. He realizes that female celebrities can read his diary. Good! The lightning point was avoided!
How to practice the Asura Way and practice the Ghost Way? Do both the heavenly and human beings practice the ghost way?
About "I!" Written by the little ancestor who robbed the tomb in Siheyuan. The little ancestor of the courtyard! No one can interrupt my study! Chapter 61 Qin Jingru was insulted! Commentary on the chapter where He Dashan punishes the Jia family for being white-eyed wolves [Crazy explosion, please update for completeness].
Before pig's feet time travel, were children under 15 years old? Why didn't they believe that everyone in Lin Zhengying's movie world was real? You have already time traveled, and you don't even believe it. It collapsed too quickly.
You have a serious problem with your combat ability. I suggest you check the relevant settings of Dragon Ball before writing about it.
Can the author tell me your home address?
Is there a female Loki among the top ten heroines?
Is it popular to follow the Hu Ge route recently? The books are all about the same
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It's possible that this is the setting of this book, and trolls, please don't tell me that it seems like this.
Have so many people really seen it?
Of course there are many heroines, isn't life just a pleasure?
Just 500 flowers. Here you go, you're welcome.